✨Who Would Care?✨ An orphan RP

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Please Read First
A) By participating in this game, I promise that all BYC Rules will be followed and that I have read and understood the Role Play Rules that are in a sticky at the top of the Games forum.
B) I promise that all content is to be rated G and suitable for all ages.
C) I promise that there will be no swearing, cursing (including censoring by using symbols) or inappropriate adult sexual activity or innuendo. This extends to mating, breeding or innuendo in non-human characters as well.
D) I promise to treat others with respect and kindness as is the BYC way.
E) I promise not to post any material that is a violation of copyright. Basically this means: if you didn't create the content (like an image / picture) and don't have direct permission from the content creator to post it, then don't.


(Skip story for summary.)

It was cold. The icy wind blew forcibly, ripping brown leaves off their stems and letting them flutter to the ground, where a poor girl was feebly raking a puny pile of half-frozen, wet leaves together, a job that seemed everlasting by the constantly falling leaves. As she raked, the girl stumbled over a protruding root and fell to the ground. She picked herself up and picked up her thin shawl as well. She wiped away the grit and tears with her dirty, ragged sleeve, and continued to rake.
An hour later.
The little girl finished her chore and walked slowly into an ancient looking mansion. Little ragged girls and boys were scuttering around, cleaning and doing chores. Several nurses were wandering about, looking for resting children. The little girl stopped in front of a little flame that burned on a piece of wood, chopped by one of the children, of course. The eye of a short little nurse caught sight of her, and she barked out, "Hey!! No stoppin'! Get back to work!" The girl shivered, pulling her shawl tighter around her thin shoulders. She, under the speculative eye of the nurse, moved on her way.
The girl reached a large door, and put her ear to it. She could hear faint, sad classical music playing. She paled, The lady is in a bad mood today. The girl knocked quietly on the door, and almost before she finished, a stout, pompous woman with fierce looks opened the door, revealing a richly furnished room with a table, which had a recorder with the classical music playing. "Well?" The woman snapped. "What do you want AGAIN, Milly?" The little girl shrunk under the cruel lady's gaze. "Ma'am, I'd like some brek'ist, please." The little girl said timidly. "I finished my chores." The big woman glared, raising her hand as if to strike her. "You can have breakfast when you finish ALL the chores!! Go!!" Milly cowered in fear, trembling like a leaf. "Please Miss Butch!" She pleaded. The woman slapped her, and Milly fell to the ground, tears streaming down her face. "I don't care about you orphans! I don't care! You weasels!" Miss Butch fairly screamed, slamming the door.
As Milly walked down the hallway, she could still hear the woman ranting. She sighed, as a fresh batch of tears slid down her gaunt and pale cheeks. She thought to herself, Maybe Rose was right. Why should we stay? No one cares about us. I mean, who would care?

Summary- (There are a bunch of orphans that are being mistreated and half starved, but there is a tiny group of orphans that are planning to escape.

Form:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
History:
Appearance:
Personality:
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No):
Other:

Rules:

1) People, they're boys and girls, not 18 year olds. NO LOVE!! You may have boy and girl admiration, but those are two absolutely different things!

2) The maximum age is 16

3) You can play the nurses, but there is no need to make a character form for them...

4) Please have fun!


Name: Milly
Age: 14
Gender: Female
History: TBR
Appearance: Thin, but pretty. Has short cropped brown hair with ragged clothing, has a scar from one ear, to her eye.
Personality: Shy, timid, but sweet.
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): Yes
Other: Rose's best friend

Name: Rose
Age: 15
Gender: Female
History: TBR
Appearance: Very pretty, not as thin as the rest of them because of her sneaky abilities. Curly hair, keeps it as clean and tidy as she can. Brown eyes.
Personality: Sweet, Brave, caring, a born leader
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): Yes; she is the leader of it.
Other: She is Milly's best friend. Miss Butch does NOT like her.

Name: Miss Butch
Age: ahem... 52
Gender: Female
History: Unknown
Appearance: Red firey hair that she keeps in a bun, but it still frizzes out. I have already mentioned that she was fat, and her face is quite ugly. Too ugly to describe.
Personality: Mean, cruel, pompous, only thinks of herself
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): Hehe. Uh, no.
Other: She listens to sad, classical music when she is upset.

PLEASE DO NOT COPY!!! YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW LONG THIS TOOK!!!
 
Name: Carrie
Age: 7
Gender: Girl
History: left at the orphanage by a police officer when her parents and older brother died in a car accident when she was 1.
Appearance: beat up by the nurses and miss butch but is average hight with just above average looks
Personality: brave, daring, but kind, caring, and friendly
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): Yes
Other: is good with animals, an alley cat brought her food for the first few years of her life and she has made friends with his decendants

Name: Randy Butch (is it ok if i make Miss Butch have a kid?)
Age: 15
Gender: Male
History: Miss Butch's son
Appearance: fat, has freckles, basically looks like Harry Potter's step brother exepet he is uglier
Personality: just like his mother, and he is also over obsessed with his phone
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): No
Other: leads a gang that bullies the orphans
 
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Name:Luna Irine Katree(Luna)
Age:13
Gender:Female
History:Luna has always been one of the least wanted kids.No one ever wants to adopt her cause they think she's weird.Luna has befriended the alley cats and brings them scraps of food.
Appearance:Luna has silky jet black hair and the palest skin.She has reddish eyes.She sometimes weres a cloke, and if she put it on, you can see her face at all.
Personality:Weird, oddly quiet, odd, cold, she can be kind, but rarely.
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No):Yes
Other:Her favorite alley cat is a young kitten she named Spider.
 
Please Read First
A) By participating in this game, I promise that all BYC Rules will be followed and that I have read and understood the Role Play Rules that are in a sticky at the top of the Games forum.
B) I promise that all content is to be rated G and suitable for all ages.
C) I promise that there will be no swearing, cursing (including censoring by using symbols) or inappropriate adult sexual activity or innuendo. This extends to mating, breeding or innuendo in non-human characters as well.
D) I promise to treat others with respect and kindness as is the BYC way.
E) I promise not to post any material that is a violation of copyright. Basically this means: if you didn't create the content (like an image / picture) and don't have direct permission from the content creator to post it, then don't.


(Skip story for summary.)

It was cold. The icy wind blew forcibly, ripping brown leaves off their stems and letting them flutter to the ground, where a poor girl was feebly raking a puny pile of half-frozen, wet leaves together, a job that seemed everlasting by the constantly falling leaves. As she raked, the girl stumbled over a protruding root and fell to the ground. She picked herself up and picked up her thin shawl as well. She wiped away the grit and tears with her dirty, ragged sleeve, and continued to rake.
An hour later.
The little girl finished her chore and walked slowly into an ancient looking mansion. Little ragged girls and boys were scuttering around, cleaning and doing chores. Several nurses were wandering about, looking for resting children. The little girl stopped in front of a little flame that burned on a piece of wood, chopped by one of the children, of course. The eye of a short little nurse caught sight of her, and she barked out, "Hey!! No stoppin'! Get back to work!" The girl shivered, pulling her shawl tighter around her thin shoulders. She, under the speculative eye of the nurse, moved on her way.
The girl reached a large door, and put her ear to it. She could hear faint, sad classical music playing. She paled, The lady is in a bad mood today. The girl knocked quietly on the door, and almost before she finished, a stout, pompous woman with fierce looks opened the door, revealing a richly furnished room with a table, which had a recorder with the classical music playing. "Well?" The woman snapped. "What do you want AGAIN, Milly?" The little girl shrunk under the cruel lady's gaze. "Ma'am, I'd like some brek'ist, please." The little girl said timidly. "I finished my chores." The big woman glared, raising her hand as if to strike her. "You can have breakfast when you finish ALL the chores!! Go!!" Milly cowered in fear, trembling like a leaf. "Please Miss Butch!" She pleaded. The woman slapped her, and Milly fell to the ground, tears streaming down her face. "I don't care about you orphans! I don't care! You weasels!" Miss Butch fairly screamed, slamming the door.
As Milly walked down the hallway, she could still hear the woman ranting. She sighed, as a fresh batch of tears slid down her gaunt and pale cheeks. She thought to herself, Maybe Rose was right. Why should we stay? No one cares about us. I mean, who would care?

Summary- (There are a bunch of orphans that are being mistreated and half starved, but there is a tiny group of orphans that are planning to escape.

Form:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
History:
Appearance:
Personality:
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No):
Other:

Rules:

1) People, they're boys and girls, not 18 year olds. NO LOVE!! You may have boy and girl admiration, but those are two absolutely different things!

2) The maximum age is 16

3) You can play the nurses, but there is no need to make a character form for them...

4) Please have fun!


Name: Milly
Age: 14
Gender: Female
History: TBR
Appearance: Thin, but pretty. Has short cropped brown hair with ragged clothing, has a scar from one ear, to her eye.
Personality: Shy, timid, but sweet.
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): Yes
Other: Rose's best friend

Name: Rose
Age: 15
Gender: Female
History: TBR
Appearance: Very pretty, not as thin as the rest of them because of her sneaky abilities. Curly hair, keeps it as clean and tidy as she can. Brown eyes.
Personality: Sweet, Brave, caring, a born leader
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): Yes; she is the leader of it.
Other: She is Milly's best friend. Miss Butch does NOT like her.

Name: Miss Butch
Age: ahem... 52
Gender: Female
History: Unknown
Appearance: Red firey hair that she keeps in a bun, but it still frizzes out. I have already mentioned that she was fat, and her face is quite ugly. Too ugly to describe.
Personality: Mean, cruel, pompous, only thinks of herself
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): Hehe. Uh, no.
Other: She listens to sad, classical music when she is upset.
 
[COLOR=333333]Name: Carrie[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Age: 7[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Gender: Girl[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]History: left at the orphanage by a police officer when her parents and older brother died in a car accident when she was 1. [/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Appearance: beat up by the nurses and miss butch but is average hight with just above average looks[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Personality: brave, daring, but kind, caring, and friendly[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): Yes[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Other: is good with animals, an alley cat brought her food for the first few years of her life and she has made friends with his decendants[/COLOR]

[COLOR=333333]Name: Randy Butch (is it ok if i make Miss Butch have a kid?)[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Age: 15[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Gender: Male[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]History: Miss Butch's son[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Appearance: fat, has freckles, basically looks like Harry Potter's step brother exepet he is uglier[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Personality: just like his mother, and he is also over obsessed with his phone[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No): No[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]Other: leads a gang that bullies the orphans[/COLOR][COLOR=333333]
[/COLOR]
 

Carrie is Accepted. Umm, well, she is a Miss. So, well...
 
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Name:Luna Irine Katree(Luna)
Age:13
Gender:Female
History:Luna has always been one of the least wanted kids.No one ever wants to adopt her cause they think she's weird.Luna has befriended the alley cats and brings them scraps of food.
Appearance:Luna has silky jet black hair and the palest skin.She has reddish eyes.She sometimes weres a cloke, and if she put it on, you can see her face at all.
Personality:Weird, oddly quiet, odd, cold, she can be kind, but rarely.
Part of the orphan "revalution" (Yes or No):Yes
Other:Her favorite alley cat is a young kitten she named Spider.

Accepted
 
(My one concern...Where are child protective services? XD Though, I like Harry Potter, so I don't have much room to judge.)

Name: Imryll Bellas
Age: 13
Gender: Female
History: Imryll is kinda worried about going to prison, so she keeps her history to herself...But that doesn't mean I can't put it in here.
Imryll's mother was 19, very young, and she was also poor. Not even committed to her child, Imryll had been ignored by her mother for years. This was rough on her mental state, with the fact she had to educate herself, and she had no other parent to talk to for comfort.
With the lack of a decent parent in her life, Imryll became a criminal. Not too bad at first, though. Stealing cheap things, pick pocketing a little. But then she realized how many people she felt disdain for, and there was a way to get rid of them...
She had always thought about murder every once in a while when she was really angry, but never actually thought it was a good idea to do it. But when her mom continued to give all the work to her own kid, she was pushed over the edge.

Before Imryll made dinner that night, she went to go fishing on a dock in the ocean and caught a pufferfish on purpose. Gutting it and keeping the poisonous part, she took home some fish that her mom found perfectly acceptable, because she had no idea what it was.
When she made fish stew that night she used the pufferfish, and said she wasn't hungry once she was done. Imryll was a thin girl, pretty underweight, so her mom shrugged off her not eating since it was normal. And that night, her mom died from being poisoned.
Imryll took her mom's things to sell and left her home, planning to live on the streets. On the streets her living conditions were so poor that she was driven a little insane, if she wasn't insane already, and somewhere along the road she ended up in an orphanage.

Appearance:
Personality: Insane, kind of a bully, loves stealing. She really wishes she could befriend someone and talk about her feelings that she was never given the ability to discuss, but everyone gets creeped out by her so she strays away from socializing.
Part of the orphan "revolution" (Yes or No): No. The kids are creeped out by her, so secrets being shared with her, or anyone even talking to her, doesn't happen much.
Other: None

Name: Charlie Shyr
Age: 22
Gender: Male
History: Charlie used to live in Scotland, but decided to go to America, a country he greatly respected.
Charlie worked hard his entire life and eventually became a cop. He is usually undercover, and is currently investigating this orphanage that seems to be less than satisfactory with the law. Charlie is undercover, and is 'working' there, hoping to gain the trust of this place so he can gather enough information to arrest whoever runs it. He was originally following a girl named Imryll Bellas, because one of his buddies was suspecting her to be the cause of her mother's death, but with the state of the orphanage he's doing two investigations in one.

Appearance: Tall with tanish skin, messy blonde hair, and black stubble. His teeth aren't horrid, but still pretty crooked and lacking a visit to the orthodontist. His nose is crooked as well, and he has rather big ears.
Charlie's eyes are hazel and he used to be in a rock band so he still kinda has that style (an ear piercing, usually wears black tank tops with band names (unless the occasion is professional), and has a tattoo on his hand).
His nails always look like he put black fingernail polish on them and then took it off before it dried, so the perimeter of his nails are black. This may or may not be because he actually did that.

Personality: Charlie isn't very professional, extremely stubborn, and he is sorta rebellious, but he still knows right from wrong and knows how to be serious so he makes a good policeman. He's kind hearted but to stay undercover and get his job done he doesn't show his actual personality.
Part of the orphan "revolution" (Yes or No): Kind of...But he's pretty much just doing his job, not rebelling.
Other: Guys can be nurses too, so...This should be valid.
 
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(My one concern...Where are child protective services? XD Though, I like Harry Potter, so I don't have much room to judge.)

Name: Imryll Bellas
Age: 13
Gender: Female
History: Imryll is kinda worried about going to prison, so she keeps her history to herself...But that doesn't mean I can't put it in here.
Imryll's mother was 19, very young, and she was also poor. Not even committed to her child, Imryll had been ignored by her mother for years. This was rough on her mental state, with the fact she had to educate herself, and she had no other parent to talk to for comfort.
With the lack of a decent parent in her life, Imryll became a criminal. Not too bad at first, though. Stealing cheap things, pick pocketing a little. But then she realized how many people she felt disdain for, and there was a way to get rid of them...
She had always thought about murder every once in a while when she was really angry, but never actually thought it was a good idea to do it. But when her mom continued to give all the work to her own kid, she was pushed over the edge.
Before Imryll made dinner that night, she went to go fishing on a dock in the ocean and caught a pufferfish on purpose. Gutting it and keeping the poisonous part, she took home some fish that her mom found perfectly acceptable, because she had no idea what it was.
When she made fish stew that night she used the pufferfish, and said she wasn't hungry once she was done. Imryll was a thin girl, pretty underweight, so her mom shrugged off her not eating since it was normal. And that night, her mom died from being poisoned.
Imryll took her mom's things to sell and left her home, planning to live on the streets. On the streets her living conditions were so poor that she was driven a little insane, if she wasn't insane already, and somewhere along the road she ended up in an orphanage.

Appearance:
Personality: Insane, kind of a bully, loves stealing. She really wishes she could befriend someone and talk about her feelings that she was never given the ability to discuss, but everyone gets creeped out by her so she strays away from socializing.
Part of the orphan "revolution" (Yes or No): No. The kids are creeped out by her, so secrets being shared with her, or anyone even talking to her, doesn't happen much.
Other: None

Name: Charlie Shyr
Age: 22
Gender: Male
History: Charlie used to live in Scotland, but decided to go to America, a country he greatly respected.
Charlie worked hard his entire life and eventually became a cop. He is usually undercover, and is currently investigating this orphanage that seems to be less than satisfactory with the law. Charlie is undercover, and is 'working' there, hoping to gain the trust of this place so he can gather enough information to arrest whoever runs it. He was originally following a girl named Imryll Bellas, because one of his buddies was suspecting her to be the cause of her mother's death, but with the state of the orphanage he's doing two investigations in one.

Appearance: Tall with tanish skin, messy blonde hair, and black stubble. His teeth aren't horrid, but still pretty crooked and lacking a visit to the orthodontist. His nose is crooked as well, and he has rather big ears.
Charlie's eyes are hazel and he used to be in a rock band so he still kinda has that style (an ear piercing, usually wears black tank tops with band names (unless the occasion is professional), and has a tattoo on his hand).
His nails always look like he put black fingernail polish on them and then took it off before it dried, so the perimeter of his nails are black. This may or may not be because he actually did that.

Personality: Charlie isn't very professional, extremely stubborn, and he is sorta rebellious, but he still knows right from wrong and knows how to be serious so he makes a good policeman. He's kind hearted but to stay undercover and get his job done he doesn't show his actual personality.
Part of the orphan "revolution" (Yes or No): Kind of...But he's pretty much just doing his job, not rebelling.
Other: Guys can be nurses too, so...This should be valid.

WOW!! Interesting characters! Accepted!
 

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