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post #1 of 835
7/28/11 at 3:20pm
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Hi!  I am writing a story in a hen's eyes, about her life as a chicken.  I am only done with chapter one so far, but I will post chapters as I finish them.  It will get more interesting as I continue, I promise.  Please comment and give me tips and pointers. big_smile

**DISCLAIMER**
This is an origional story following a hen from birth, in her words.  This story is MY origional work and should not be copied!!!  The idea was mine solely and I've worked so hard on this.  I plan to have it published and copyrighted, so PLEASE DO NOT COPY!  If you plan to read this and then copy it, DO NOT READ IT!!!

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In Cloudy's Eyes
A Peek Into a Chicken's Mind

CHAPTER ONE REVISION:
http://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?pid=7886352#p7886352

CHAPTER TWO REVISION:
http://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?pid=7886402#p7886402


Edited by ChickLover98 - 11/20/11 at 7:56am
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Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
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post #2 of 835
7/28/11 at 3:30pm

thumbsup haha I can just imagine those thoughts going through a little chickies mind too. I know I would be ready to get out of that shell! more please! tongue

Wheaten/Blue Wheaten Ameraucanas, Blue Copper and Splash Marans, 1 EE, 1 white Silkie hen, 1 Dominique pullet. 2 cats and 2 dogs. Homesteader, organic gardener.

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Wheaten/Blue Wheaten Ameraucanas, Blue Copper and Splash Marans, 1 EE, 1 white Silkie hen, 1 Dominique pullet. 2 cats and 2 dogs. Homesteader, organic gardener.

"Gardening is the purest of human pleasures." -- Francis Bacon

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post #3 of 835
7/28/11 at 3:31pm
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Originally Posted by frosthazard 

thumbsup haha I can just imagine those thoughts going through a little chickies mind too. I know I would be ready to get out of that shell! more please! tongue


OK, thanks for looking! big_smile  I will write more soon!

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Momma to Amberlinks, Black Sexlinks, a White Leghorn, AL/RSL mixes, Cochins, Ameraucanas, Barred Rocks, Polish chicks and 1 sweet Silkie

Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
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post #4 of 835
7/28/11 at 3:47pm

That is very good so far!!! It wasn't boring at all. More more more please!

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Two Gold Sebrights, one Columbian Rock, one Amber Link, two Golden Comets, one Barred Rock, and one Dominique!

Dutch mix rabbit, Parakeet bird, Weimaraner dog, and Australian Shepherd puppy.

 

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My Little City Farm

Two Gold Sebrights, one Columbian Rock, one Amber Link, two Golden Comets, one Barred Rock, and one Dominique!

Dutch mix rabbit, Parakeet bird, Weimaraner dog, and Australian Shepherd puppy.

 

Visit our blog at http://www.clevelandchickens.blogspot.com

 

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post #5 of 835
7/28/11 at 5:29pm
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Originally Posted by luvinmychickens 

That is very good so far!!! It wasn't boring at all. More more more please!


Thanks, so much!  I'm working on more now. big_smile

Momma to Amberlinks, Black Sexlinks, a White Leghorn, AL/RSL mixes, Cochins, Ameraucanas, Barred Rocks, Polish chicks and 1 sweet Silkie

Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
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Momma to Amberlinks, Black Sexlinks, a White Leghorn, AL/RSL mixes, Cochins, Ameraucanas, Barred Rocks, Polish chicks and 1 sweet Silkie

Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
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post #6 of 835
7/28/11 at 5:49pm

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If you want to see what breeds I have, go here! http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/the-egg-box-farm

 

I dream of a day when chickens can cross the road without having their motives questioned.

 

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If you want to see what breeds I have, go here! http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/the-egg-box-farm

 

I dream of a day when chickens can cross the road without having their motives questioned.

 

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post #7 of 835
7/28/11 at 5:55pm
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CHAPTER TWO REVISION:
http://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?pid=7886402#p7886402


Edited by ChickLover98 - 11/20/11 at 7:56am
Momma to Amberlinks, Black Sexlinks, a White Leghorn, AL/RSL mixes, Cochins, Ameraucanas, Barred Rocks, Polish chicks and 1 sweet Silkie

Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
Reply
Momma to Amberlinks, Black Sexlinks, a White Leghorn, AL/RSL mixes, Cochins, Ameraucanas, Barred Rocks, Polish chicks and 1 sweet Silkie

Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
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post #8 of 835
7/28/11 at 6:14pm

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If you want to see what breeds I have, go here! http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/the-egg-box-farm

 

I dream of a day when chickens can cross the road without having their motives questioned.

 

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If you want to see what breeds I have, go here! http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/the-egg-box-farm

 

I dream of a day when chickens can cross the road without having their motives questioned.

 

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post #9 of 835
7/28/11 at 7:03pm

This is so awesome! A lot different from your everyday literature, huh?

Keep writing big_smile

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Urban Flock of 1 Egyptian Fayoumi, 1 Buff Cochin, and 1 Black Australorp
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post #10 of 835
7/28/11 at 8:18pm

thumbsup this is great!

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Finally! Chickens!!!     Member of the Derperella Club!
My BYC best friends are polishchickens111, ChickenPeep, and willowbranchfarm!

I am the Magical Avian Emperor Mr. Lord King Sir! BOW TO ME or be captured by the evil empire of apples! (Don't be fooled, I'm a girl)

 

 

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