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post #621 of 835
9/19/11 at 9:50am
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Originally Posted by Nitrostreak 

Hey, ChickLover. Your story is really, really cute. As an aspiring author myself, I understand how fun it is to write and create worlds, characters, and adventures.

Also, did I read right? You're not even in high school? This is EXCELLENT writing for someone your age. Seriously. I'm on COLLEGE and I have read some REAL junk from fellow students. The fact that your writing is THIS good at your age is a sign that you have AMAZING potential.

However, I'm going to make myself really unpopular by saying this... Do NOT rush to finish a chapter just for other peoples' sake. Write at your own pace. It's DEFINITELY good to have someone there, urging you to continue, but rushing out chapter after chapter with minimal editing isn't helping YOU.

Also, if you like, I would be happy to beta read and/or critique for you. I'm an English major, so I promise I'd be helpful. lol Just an offer, though. Don't feel pressured at all to accept.

I'm terribly sorry about your precious Daisy and Chicklet. I know how hard it is to lose a chicken, especially after fighting so hard to keep them alive. I've lost a couple of my flock to illness, and a few to my terrible sister's terrible dog... If you need to take time away from BYC, by all means, do so. Do what's best for YOU.

You're in school, so your homework and extracurricular activities should come before this story, as much as I know some of your more... adamant followers will disliking me for saying that.

I eagerly await continuation, but I can be patient. I have some stories I've been waiting, literally, years for an update on. Your followers should realized how blessed they are to have received so many updates in such a short amount of time. Writing is art, and you know what they say? You can't rush art.

Happy writing~

- Nitrostreak.


X2! right on!

I looked at all the caged animals in the barn...the cast-offs of human society. I saw in their eyes love and hope, fear and dread, sadness, and betrayal. And I was angry."God," I said, "this is terrible! Why don't you do something?"God was silent for a moment, and then He spoke softly, "I have done something," he replied.  "I created you."

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I looked at all the caged animals in the barn...the cast-offs of human society. I saw in their eyes love and hope, fear and dread, sadness, and betrayal. And I was angry."God," I said, "this is terrible! Why don't you do something?"God was silent for a moment, and then He spoke softly, "I have done something," he replied.  "I created you."

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post #622 of 835
9/19/11 at 3:57pm
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Originally Posted by Nitrostreak 

Oh, one more thing. I'm subscribing to the thread. I tend to lurk, so I won't post after every chapter, but I WILL be reading. <3


I totally agree with Nitrostreak. Do what ever you need to do for yourself. I adore you story, but your happiness and education should come first. I have been guilty of posting wanting more, but only in fun. I know you are busy at your age.

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post #623 of 835
9/19/11 at 4:01pm
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Originally Posted by fishnet1971 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nitrostreak 

Hey, ChickLover. Your story is really, really cute. As an aspiring author myself, I understand how fun it is to write and create worlds, characters, and adventures.

Also, did I read right? You're not even in high school? This is EXCELLENT writing for someone your age. Seriously. I'm on COLLEGE and I have read some REAL junk from fellow students. The fact that your writing is THIS good at your age is a sign that you have AMAZING potential.

However, I'm going to make myself really unpopular by saying this... Do NOT rush to finish a chapter just for other peoples' sake. Write at your own pace. It's DEFINITELY good to have someone there, urging you to continue, but rushing out chapter after chapter with minimal editing isn't helping YOU.

Also, if you like, I would be happy to beta read and/or critique for you. I'm an English major, so I promise I'd be helpful. lol Just an offer, though. Don't feel pressured at all to accept.

I'm terribly sorry about your precious Daisy and Chicklet. I know how hard it is to lose a chicken, especially after fighting so hard to keep them alive. I've lost a couple of my flock to illness, and a few to my terrible sister's terrible dog... If you need to take time away from BYC, by all means, do so. Do what's best for YOU.

You're in school, so your homework and extracurricular activities should come before this story, as much as I know some of your more... adamant followers will disliking me for saying that.

I eagerly await continuation, but I can be patient. I have some stories I've been waiting, literally, years for an update on. Your followers should realized how blessed they are to have received so many updates in such a short amount of time. Writing is art, and you know what they say? You can't rush art.

Happy writing~

- Nitrostreak.


X2! right on!


x3! Some people are really junkie writers. You are amazing!

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Finally! Chickens!!!     Member of the Derperella Club!
My BYC best friends are polishchickens111, ChickenPeep, and willowbranchfarm!

I am the Magical Avian Emperor Mr. Lord King Sir! BOW TO ME or be captured by the evil empire of apples! (Don't be fooled, I'm a girl)

 

 

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post #624 of 835
9/19/11 at 6:04pm
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Originally Posted by birdies 
Quote:
Originally Posted by fishnet1971 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nitrostreak 

Hey, ChickLover. Your story is really, really cute. As an aspiring author myself, I understand how fun it is to write and create worlds, characters, and adventures.

Also, did I read right? You're not even in high school? This is EXCELLENT writing for someone your age. Seriously. I'm on COLLEGE and I have read some REAL junk from fellow students. The fact that your writing is THIS good at your age is a sign that you have AMAZING potential.

However, I'm going to make myself really unpopular by saying this... Do NOT rush to finish a chapter just for other peoples' sake. Write at your own pace. It's DEFINITELY good to have someone there, urging you to continue, but rushing out chapter after chapter with minimal editing isn't helping YOU.

Also, if you like, I would be happy to beta read and/or critique for you. I'm an English major, so I promise I'd be helpful. lol Just an offer, though. Don't feel pressured at all to accept.

I'm terribly sorry about your precious Daisy and Chicklet. I know how hard it is to lose a chicken, especially after fighting so hard to keep them alive. I've lost a couple of my flock to illness, and a few to my terrible sister's terrible dog... If you need to take time away from BYC, by all means, do so. Do what's best for YOU.

You're in school, so your homework and extracurricular activities should come before this story, as much as I know some of your more... adamant followers will disliking me for saying that.

I eagerly await continuation, but I can be patient. I have some stories I've been waiting, literally, years for an update on. Your followers should realized how blessed they are to have received so many updates in such a short amount of time. Writing is art, and you know what they say? You can't rush art.

Happy writing~

- Nitrostreak.


X2! right on!


x3! Some people are really junkie writers. You are amazing!


x4! You rock! I have been following this thread for so long! It helped me find out what is wrong with my BO. She is laying now.

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post #625 of 835
9/20/11 at 7:09am

you cannot quit! wanna know why? i didnt have a computer from a very long time and i was only on page 15. i just read all the pages from page 15-63 just to read the story. Now dont say no one is reading it. i must be the biggest fan cause i have been following this since chapter 1! i was one of the first to comment!

 

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6 Chickens!!  Silkie, 2 mutts, 2 Seabrights, and a Easter Egger

 

I <3 them all :P..... FIRST EGG 1/16/12 from Rosie.

 

 

 

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post #626 of 835
9/22/11 at 5:29pm

are you going to write? well? where is chapter another??!??! big_smile need more!! bowlovebowlovebowlovebowlovethumbsuptongue2thumbsuplovewee more?

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post #627 of 835
9/23/11 at 12:32pm
Thread Starter 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nitrostreak 

Hey, ChickLover. Your story is really, really cute. As an aspiring author myself, I understand how fun it is to write and create worlds, characters, and adventures.

Also, did I read right? You're not even in high school? This is EXCELLENT writing for someone your age. Seriously. I'm on COLLEGE and I have read some REAL junk from fellow students. The fact that your writing is THIS good at your age is a sign that you have AMAZING potential.

However, I'm going to make myself really unpopular by saying this... Do NOT rush to finish a chapter just for other peoples' sake. Write at your own pace. It's DEFINITELY good to have someone there, urging you to continue, but rushing out chapter after chapter with minimal editing isn't helping YOU.

Also, if you like, I would be happy to beta read and/or critique for you. I'm an English major, so I promise I'd be helpful. lol Just an offer, though. Don't feel pressured at all to accept.

I'm terribly sorry about your precious Daisy and Chicklet. I know how hard it is to lose a chicken, especially after fighting so hard to keep them alive. I've lost a couple of my flock to illness, and a few to my terrible sister's terrible dog... If you need to take time away from BYC, by all means, do so. Do what's best for YOU.

You're in school, so your homework and extracurricular activities should come before this story, as much as I know some of your more... adamant followers will disliking me for saying that.

I eagerly await continuation, but I can be patient. I have some stories I've been waiting, literally, years for an update on. Your followers should realized how blessed they are to have received so many updates in such a short amount of time. Writing is art, and you know what they say? You can't rush art.

Happy writing~

- Nitrostreak.


Yep, I'm in Junior High.  Thanks so much!  That post is just what I needed everyone to see!  hugs  I would love for you to critique it, whenever you want. big_smile  So sorry to hear about you losing some of your birds. sad

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Momma to Amberlinks, Black Sexlinks, a White Leghorn, AL/RSL mixes, Cochins, Ameraucanas, Barred Rocks, Polish chicks and 1 sweet Silkie

Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
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post #628 of 835
9/23/11 at 1:06pm
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Originally Posted by ChickLover98 

Yep, I'm in Junior High.  Thanks so much!  That post is just what I needed everyone to see!  hugs  I would love for you to critique it, whenever you want. big_smile  So sorry to hear about you losing some of your birds. sad


Glad to be of help. hugs
As I said, I'm in college, plus I work most of my soul away at a local fast food joint, so I don't have much time, but I'll PM you critiques whenever I get a chance smile

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Nervous Newbie and instant Naked-Neck fan!
I have: Two parents, Two brothers, Two sisters, Four horses, Three dogs, Two cats, and twenty-something chickens~

Bowties and Stetsons are cool.
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post #629 of 835
9/23/11 at 1:11pm
Thread Starter 
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Originally Posted by Nitrostreak 
Quote:
Originally Posted by ChickLover98 

Yep, I'm in Junior High.  Thanks so much!  That post is just what I needed everyone to see!  hugs  I would love for you to critique it, whenever you want. big_smile  So sorry to hear about you losing some of your birds. sad


Glad to be of help. hugs
As I said, I'm in college, plus I work most of my soul away at a local fast food joint, so I don't have much time, but I'll PM you critiques whenever I get a chance smile


Ok, thanks. big_smile

Momma to Amberlinks, Black Sexlinks, a White Leghorn, AL/RSL mixes, Cochins, Ameraucanas, Barred Rocks, Polish chicks and 1 sweet Silkie

Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
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Momma to Amberlinks, Black Sexlinks, a White Leghorn, AL/RSL mixes, Cochins, Ameraucanas, Barred Rocks, Polish chicks and 1 sweet Silkie

Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
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post #630 of 835
9/24/11 at 5:16pm

big_smile What a neat idea will you publish it?

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