What a neat idea will you publish it?
Yep. 
Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
Oh yeah, and him. That RSL called JASPER! LIKE Jasper on Facebook! www.facebook.com/jaspertherooster
What a neat idea will you publish it?
Yep. 
Chapter ??
Even though it only lasted a couple of minutes, it seems like eternity! Flower held me down, even harder, her sharp claws, piercing into my skin. I want to yell out in pain, but why give Flower the satisfaction?
"Cloudy! Do you need us to help you?" I hear Lilly call out to me.
Yes, in fact, I do. But, I really don't want to involve my friends, taking a risk that they could get hurt. That would be the worst thing, and I would never forgive myself.
Plus, my pride and ego won't accept help. I want to fight my own battles, thank you very much!
"Cloudy?" Onyx yells, concern in his voice. I can't die now, especially not in front of Nyx! Help!
"I'm... Fine..." I choke out. That's a lie.
I twist my body, but Flower's claws dig deeper into my wings. There's not much I can do now, laying on my back. I stare up at Flower's angry face. She's snarling and she looks so gruesome.
"Give it up. It's no use to fight back," Flower snarls.
"No!" I yell, defiantly.
She just rolls her eyes at me.
"Ok then," she says, putting all of her weight on my wings. It hurts like nothing has ever hurt before.
I cringe and I know that there's nothing that I can do. I'm going to die. I see blood pouring out of my left wing and I start to panic. I look frantically back and forth. I feel like screaming and kicking, but that would just make Flower angrier. This really is the end, isn't it? Please, make it fast!
I close my eyes, ready to give up.
"Cloudy, don't give up! You can do it!" Primrose cheers.
"Please, Clouds," Onyx encourages.
"I..." I squeak.
"Don't worry! I'll help you!" Onyx yells to me.
"No, Nyx, please!" I suddenly call out. I don't want him involved, He's going to think I'm a wimp if I don't do this on my own. Can things get any worse?
((MORE TO COME AFTER HOMEWORK))
Please don't tell me you STILL haven't finished your homework! 
Finally! Chickens!!! Member of the Derperella Club!
My BYC best friends are polishchickens111, ChickenPeep, and willowbranchfarm!
I am the Magical Avian Emperor Mr. Lord King Sir! BOW TO ME or be captured by the evil empire of apples! (Don't be fooled, I'm a girl)
Finally! Chickens!!! Member of the Derperella Club!
My BYC best friends are polishchickens111, ChickenPeep, and willowbranchfarm!
I am the Magical Avian Emperor Mr. Lord King Sir! BOW TO ME or be captured by the evil empire of apples! (Don't be fooled, I'm a girl)
Chapter ??
Even though it only lasted a couple of minutes, it seems like eternity! Flower held me down, even harder, her sharp claws, piercing into my skin. I want to yell out in pain, but why give Flower the satisfaction?
"Cloudy! Do you need us to help you?" I hear Lilly call out to me.
Yes, in fact, I do. But, I really don't want to involve my friends, taking a risk that they could get hurt. That would be the worst thing, and I would never forgive myself.
Plus, my pride and ego won't accept help. I want to fight my own battles, thank you very much!
"Cloudy?" Onyx yells, concern in his voice. I can't die now, especially not in front of Nyx! Help!
"I'm... Fine..." I choke out. That's a lie.
I twist my body, but Flower's claws dig deeper into my wings. There's not much I can do now, laying on my back. I stare up at Flower's angry face. She's snarling and she looks so gruesome.
"Give it up. It's no use to fight back," Flower snarls.
"No!" I yell, defiantly.
She just rolls her eyes at me.
"Ok then," she says, putting all of her weight on my wings. It hurts like nothing has ever hurt before.
I cringe and I know that there's nothing that I can do. I'm going to die. I see blood pouring out of my left wing and I start to panic. I look frantically back and forth. I feel like screaming and kicking, but that would just make Flower angrier. This really is the end, isn't it? Please, make it fast!
I close my eyes, ready to give up.
"Cloudy, don't give up! You can do it!" Primrose cheers.
"Please, Clouds," Onyx encourages.
"I..." I squeak.
"Don't worry! I'll help you!" Onyx yells to me.
"No, Nyx, please!" I suddenly call out. I don't want him involved, He's going to think I'm a wimp if I don't do this on my own. Can things get any worse?
((MORE TO COME AFTER HOMEWORK))
Please don't tell me you STILL haven't finished your homework! 
I did, but it got erased after a computer malfunction.
Chapter ??
Even though it only lasted a couple of minutes, it seems like eternity! Flower held me down, even harder, her sharp claws, piercing into my skin. I want to yell out in pain, but why give Flower the satisfaction?
"Cloudy! Do you need us to help you?" I hear Lilly call out to me.
Yes, in fact, I do. But, I really don't want to involve my friends, taking a risk that they could get hurt. That would be the worst thing, and I would never forgive myself.
Plus, my pride and ego won't accept help. I want to fight my own battles, thank you very much!
"Cloudy?" Onyx yells, concern in his voice. I can't die now, especially not in front of Nyx! Help!
"I'm... Fine..." I choke out. That's a lie.
I twist my body, but Flower's claws dig deeper into my wings. There's not much I can do now, laying on my back. I stare up at Flower's angry face. She's snarling and she looks so gruesome.
"Give it up. It's no use to fight back," Flower snarls.
"No!" I yell, defiantly.
She just rolls her eyes at me.
"Ok then," she says, putting all of her weight on my wings. It hurts like nothing has ever hurt before.
I cringe and I know that there's nothing that I can do. I'm going to die. I see blood pouring out of my left wing and I start to panic. I look frantically back and forth. I feel like screaming and kicking, but that would just make Flower angrier. This really is the end, isn't it? Please, make it fast!
I close my eyes, ready to give up.
"Cloudy, don't give up! You can do it!" Primrose cheers.
"Please, Clouds," Onyx encourages.
"I..." I squeak.
"Don't worry! I'll help you!" Onyx yells to me.
"No, Nyx, please!" I suddenly call out. I don't want him involved, He's going to think I'm a wimp if I don't do this on my own. Can things get any worse?
((MORE TO COME AFTER HOMEWORK))
Please don't tell me you STILL haven't finished your homework! 
I did, but it got erased after a computer malfunction.
Your homework?
Finally! Chickens!!! Member of the Derperella Club!
My BYC best friends are polishchickens111, ChickenPeep, and willowbranchfarm!
I am the Magical Avian Emperor Mr. Lord King Sir! BOW TO ME or be captured by the evil empire of apples! (Don't be fooled, I'm a girl)
Finally! Chickens!!! Member of the Derperella Club!
My BYC best friends are polishchickens111, ChickenPeep, and willowbranchfarm!
I am the Magical Avian Emperor Mr. Lord King Sir! BOW TO ME or be captured by the evil empire of apples! (Don't be fooled, I'm a girl)
What a neat idea will you publish it?
Yep. 
That is great. Where can you get it? 
It`s not done yet. 
And birdies... Not my homework, the other half of the chapter.
Oh no! I know how much losing work sucks... Good luck rewriting it... I bet it'll be even better the second time! 
I will read it on if I have the time. I would rather buy the book so I can read as I walk, ride in car and in bed. That is when I get my reading done. I have to much to do on computer as is. but we will see. I hope some other posters give you feed back. It is nice to receive. 
Thanks! Yep, it'll be neat to read it when the book is out, too. 
You sure you didn't kidnap my Blue Andalusian and curl her feathers?
She looks just like the chicken in the cover, only the one on the cover is frizzled.
Hey, where am I going? And why am I in this handbasket?
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Hey, where am I going? And why am I in this handbasket?
Check out my RPs! http://www.backyardchickens.com/t/704258/the-battle-of-the-empires-new-rp-need-players
http://www.backyardchickens.com/t/761315/warriors-rp-thunderclan-riverclan-windclan-shadowclan
Please check out my story: http://www.backyardchickens.com/t/755248/the-shadows-omen-my-story-please-read


