Okay, now the prologue is up. If you look at a word and think, how the heck do I say that? Well, notice at the bottom of this post there are pronunciations. 
Now, please don't steal my "language" as I sat down for several hours devising it. It has all 26 letters of the U.S. alphabet, just sorta different. Usually over half of the letters in the words are silent, so be sure to check out here before you read for pronunciations.
Please do not steal, copy, or use the plot of this story, as I plan to one day publish it and it is MINE and mine ALONE.
Now that we understand each other, I'm sure we will all get along. 
The reason I made this thread is for opinions, suggestions, and corrections to make it better, so don't be shy. Tell me what you think.
Pronunciations:
Prologue-
Qa- (I really don't think Qa needs an pronunciation.)
dionlp- dye-own-lip
Wezlp- west-leap
anlik- an-like
Meanings
Prologue-
Qa: Go
dionlp: beauty
Wezlp: Misty
anlik: outer
Edited by horsecrazychicklovingkid - 2/22/12 at 10:11am
Jesus Christ was sinless, perfect; He was beaten with whips tipped with glass shards, spikes driven through his wrists and ankles, a crown of thorns set into his head, for us. And that includes YOU. ABC: Admit, Believe, Confess that Jesus is God's son and he gave his life for you, accept him into your heart as your savior, or, when you die, you will never have another chance. Jesus...
Jesus Christ was sinless, perfect; He was beaten with whips tipped with glass shards, spikes driven through his wrists and ankles, a crown of thorns set into his head, for us. And that includes YOU. ABC: Admit, Believe, Confess that Jesus is God's son and he gave his life for you, accept him into your heart as your savior, or, when you die, you will never have another chance. Jesus...
Don't leave us hanging, post!
