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Poll Results: Do you like the story so far?

 
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    Yes
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post #41 of 93
4/21/12 at 4:01pm

 

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Originally Posted by singingchickenmomma View Post

I don't plan to post the next chapter until tommorow! tongue2.gif Good for suspense.

 

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News Flash!!: My hobby is writing stories and drawing, and I'm an editor for a magazine. I have meetings every Monday afternoon, so I can almost guarantee that I won't log on that day.

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News Flash!!: My hobby is writing stories and drawing, and I'm an editor for a magazine. I have meetings every Monday afternoon, so I can almost guarantee that I won't log on that day.

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post #42 of 93
4/21/12 at 4:06pm
Thread Starter 

 

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"Starfire has quite the habit of trying to eat the collar of my jacket, just sayin'." -- Me

Want to learn more about me and read some of my crazy antics this summer? I've got my photography, monthly updates and other things down below!
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"Starfire has quite the habit of trying to eat the collar of my jacket, just sayin'." -- Me

Want to learn more about me and read some of my crazy antics this summer? I've got my photography, monthly updates and other things down below!
http://kickin-it-retro.blogspot.com/?m=1
Thanks guys! =3
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post #43 of 93
4/22/12 at 6:26pm
Thread Starter 

CHAPTER 7

 

The world begins swimming above me. The sky turns a truer, more deep shade of violet. I become dizzy, and the next thing I heard was the clang of my body hitting the floor, and I could barely see the cloaked figure, grinning twistedly, smoke coiling off of the barrel of the rifle.

 

Beep. Beep. Beep.

I fumble around my desk to find my alarm. It was just a dream. I remind myself. However, my hand only grabbed empty air. I blinked several times to find myself lying in a hospital bed. My vision is blurred at the very edges, and it's so quiet, despite the annoying beeping noise coming from somewhere in the room that I could not see, I can hear my own breath. I manage to croak out: "Where am I?"

A question suddenly struck my mind, filling me with fear.

Will I ever get to go home?

No, came the silent reply. Never.

"Starfire has quite the habit of trying to eat the collar of my jacket, just sayin'." -- Me

Want to learn more about me and read some of my crazy antics this summer? I've got my photography, monthly updates and other things down below!
http://kickin-it-retro.blogspot.com/?m=1
Thanks guys! =3
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"Starfire has quite the habit of trying to eat the collar of my jacket, just sayin'." -- Me

Want to learn more about me and read some of my crazy antics this summer? I've got my photography, monthly updates and other things down below!
http://kickin-it-retro.blogspot.com/?m=1
Thanks guys! =3
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post #44 of 93
4/22/12 at 6:28pm

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News Flash!!: My hobby is writing stories and drawing, and I'm an editor for a magazine. I have meetings every Monday afternoon, so I can almost guarantee that I won't log on that day.

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News Flash!!: My hobby is writing stories and drawing, and I'm an editor for a magazine. I have meetings every Monday afternoon, so I can almost guarantee that I won't log on that day.

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post #45 of 93
4/22/12 at 6:29pm

clap.gif thumbsup.gif .....Great chapter...NEXT PLEASE!!!!...lol

                                                                                     Lot's 'A' Cluckin' Farms 

                                                           

                                                                             "Where The Orpingtons Run Free!"

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                                                                                     Lot's 'A' Cluckin' Farms 

                                                           

                                                                             "Where The Orpingtons Run Free!"

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post #46 of 93
4/22/12 at 6:29pm
Thread Starter 

Not till tomorrow! wink.png

"Starfire has quite the habit of trying to eat the collar of my jacket, just sayin'." -- Me

Want to learn more about me and read some of my crazy antics this summer? I've got my photography, monthly updates and other things down below!
http://kickin-it-retro.blogspot.com/?m=1
Thanks guys! =3
Reply
"Starfire has quite the habit of trying to eat the collar of my jacket, just sayin'." -- Me

Want to learn more about me and read some of my crazy antics this summer? I've got my photography, monthly updates and other things down below!
http://kickin-it-retro.blogspot.com/?m=1
Thanks guys! =3
Reply
post #47 of 93
4/22/12 at 6:32pm

hit.gif....oook....OH the  suspense is KILLING me  I will be waiting and watching for it caf.gif

                                                                                     Lot's 'A' Cluckin' Farms 

                                                           

                                                                             "Where The Orpingtons Run Free!"

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                                                                                     Lot's 'A' Cluckin' Farms 

                                                           

                                                                             "Where The Orpingtons Run Free!"

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post #48 of 93
4/23/12 at 1:45pm

More!

 BFFs: Rebecca , Erin, Cortney, <3ChickenForever, Isabel, Olivia, and Tatiana. 99.999% of girls would die if Justin Bieber appeared at their doorstep and asked for a date. If your that 0.0001% Who's wiping blood from your fist, put this in your siggy.

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 BFFs: Rebecca , Erin, Cortney, <3ChickenForever, Isabel, Olivia, and Tatiana. 99.999% of girls would die if Justin Bieber appeared at their doorstep and asked for a date. If your that 0.0001% Who's wiping blood from your fist, put this in your siggy.

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post #49 of 93
4/23/12 at 2:01pm

I Love It! pop.gif

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post #50 of 93
4/23/12 at 3:44pm
Thread Starter 
Okay, sorry you fans, but i won't be posting the next chapter for awhile. hide.gif I am bunking with my dad for now, and i have no access to a computer. Luckily, I have my smartphone, however the next chapter is longish and it would be very difficult to type the entire chapter on ma smartphone. Again, I apologize, and thank you for reading ma story.
"Starfire has quite the habit of trying to eat the collar of my jacket, just sayin'." -- Me

Want to learn more about me and read some of my crazy antics this summer? I've got my photography, monthly updates and other things down below!
http://kickin-it-retro.blogspot.com/?m=1
Thanks guys! =3
Reply
"Starfire has quite the habit of trying to eat the collar of my jacket, just sayin'." -- Me

Want to learn more about me and read some of my crazy antics this summer? I've got my photography, monthly updates and other things down below!
http://kickin-it-retro.blogspot.com/?m=1
Thanks guys! =3
Reply
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