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Poll Results: Do you like the story so far?

 
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post #71 of 93
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Originally Posted by singingchickenmomma View Post

CHAPTER 10

 

My stomach jumps up to high-five my heart. My breath ceases. My heart gives a lurch.

It goes from slight fear, to utter terror.

I strain and strain and strain, pulling against the wires. Second time I've been held captive. I think. The wires give way, snapping. I free myself, strip the 'hospital' wristband away from my wrist, and bolt out the door. Sirens begin to wail.

This 'hospital' seemed like an endless maze, twists and turns leading to pathways or regal hallways. I slip behind a door, finding a small passage leading into the walls. Good escape. I think, diving into it. Once I'd reached the muggy end, I dashed across racks, barefoot, trying to avoid nails in the floor. My feet were silent, which was a good thing.

But suddenly, I can barely breath. The machines in this room give off smoke and a little oxygen, but not enough. I drop to my knees, groping for air.

Finally!! pop.gif

News Flash!!: My hobby is writing stories and drawing, and I'm an editor for a magazine. I have meetings every Monday afternoon, so I can almost guarantee that I won't log on that day.

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News Flash!!: My hobby is writing stories and drawing, and I'm an editor for a magazine. I have meetings every Monday afternoon, so I can almost guarantee that I won't log on that day.

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post #72 of 93
Thread Starter 

Sorry for teh long wait. I lost my papers so I couldn't post next chapter ._.

It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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post #73 of 93

more! more!

" Make a joyful noise unto the Lord, all the earth."

Psalm 98:4

 

 

1 dog, 1 cat, 19 chickens, 2 rabbits ( In memory of a sweet rabbit), 2 frogs.

 

God Bless Haley and Michaella!

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" Make a joyful noise unto the Lord, all the earth."

Psalm 98:4

 

 

1 dog, 1 cat, 19 chickens, 2 rabbits ( In memory of a sweet rabbit), 2 frogs.

 

God Bless Haley and Michaella!

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post #74 of 93
Thread Starter 

CHAPTER 11

 

I stare up at the ceiling, shaking. My vision would blur, then become sharper, then blur again. And then, everything turned a blinding shade of white.

***

"Mother!" I scream, bolting upward, only to slam my head on something hard. "What the-?" I look up. I'm in a black cave. I reach up, and my fingers brush the earth, only about two inches above my head.

"Oh good, you're awake."

I turn around to see a woman, holding a flashlight, sitting on her knees, beaming at me. I inch backwards, trying not to hit my head. "W-who are you...?" I ask.

"I'm Mrs. Martinez." She smiles.

"Where did you find me?"

"In the walls of the Vampyre Institute."

"Are-are you..."

"No, dear."

I sigh, relieved.

"We need to get you home. I take it you don't want me to call the police?"

I look to the ground, shaking my head.

"... Or your parents, right?"

I shake my head again.

"What's your name?"

Was is safe to tell a stranger my name?

"It's..."

You still have time to run!

"It's Moniqua. Moniqua Herizo."

It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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post #75 of 93

pop.gif

News Flash!!: My hobby is writing stories and drawing, and I'm an editor for a magazine. I have meetings every Monday afternoon, so I can almost guarantee that I won't log on that day.

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News Flash!!: My hobby is writing stories and drawing, and I'm an editor for a magazine. I have meetings every Monday afternoon, so I can almost guarantee that I won't log on that day.

Reply
post #76 of 93
Thread Starter 

lol.png Thank you! I'm on Chapter 20 on the handwritten version. My hand is screaming at me for a break.

It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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post #77 of 93

I love this its awesome. I read all of it.....you should write a book. :)

Hi, Im Rebecca Im a Christian girl that loves chickens!! I am a vet volunteer and I owner of 9 chickens. If you have any questions about Coccidiosis, Mites & Lice, Worms, Molting, Vent Gleet, Bumble Foot, Egg Binding, or Prolapsed Oviduct, feel free to ask me about it or pm me.
http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/mites-lice-treatment-and-prevention
http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/chickens-loosing...
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Hi, Im Rebecca Im a Christian girl that loves chickens!! I am a vet volunteer and I owner of 9 chickens. If you have any questions about Coccidiosis, Mites & Lice, Worms, Molting, Vent Gleet, Bumble Foot, Egg Binding, or Prolapsed Oviduct, feel free to ask me about it or pm me.
http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/mites-lice-treatment-and-prevention
http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/chickens-loosing...
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post #78 of 93
Thread Starter 
Aw, thanks!
It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
Reply
post #79 of 93
Thread Starter 

SORRY FOR DELAY! I've lost my papers again, so please bare with me...

It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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It's over Rodrigo. No more tricks, no more ancient artifacts, no more weapons. Let's see what you are made of, old man!
- Ezio Auditore da Firenze
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post #80 of 93

No problem.

Hi, Im Rebecca Im a Christian girl that loves chickens!! I am a vet volunteer and I owner of 9 chickens. If you have any questions about Coccidiosis, Mites & Lice, Worms, Molting, Vent Gleet, Bumble Foot, Egg Binding, or Prolapsed Oviduct, feel free to ask me about it or pm me.
http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/mites-lice-treatment-and-prevention
http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/chickens-loosing...
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Hi, Im Rebecca Im a Christian girl that loves chickens!! I am a vet volunteer and I owner of 9 chickens. If you have any questions about Coccidiosis, Mites & Lice, Worms, Molting, Vent Gleet, Bumble Foot, Egg Binding, or Prolapsed Oviduct, feel free to ask me about it or pm me.
http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/mites-lice-treatment-and-prevention
http://www.backyardchickens.com/a/chickens-loosing...
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