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Characters- Brownie and Mocha- Peep and Cheep.....
Bright and early one Summer morning, Hayley, the owner of the 4 chickens woke up in a very very happy mood :)
She went into her bathroom where her new baby Rhode Island Reds were just waking up.....
" Good morning Mocha and Brownie." Her chicks were wide awake and very hungry!
" Ok ok, heres some food to munch on. I'll be right back."
She went outside to check on Peep and Cheep, her fully grown chickens that were old enough to live outside...
She walked away to go in the garage and get there food, she grabbed a little snack. Left over watermelon!
" YAYAYAYY! Mom got us some watermelon!" Cheep yelled at the top of her lungs.
" Would you hush up down there??" Peep yelled grouchily. "I'm trying to lay an egg here!"
" Oh sorry- But before she finished her sentence some watermelon was dumped in their cage! YUMMY! They both yelled!
" Hey Cheep- said Peep, Mind saving me couple pieces?"
" You snooze you loose!" said Cheep sassily.....
A little later when Peep finally laid her egg. Hayley had already changed their water and right when Peep got up she gathered the eggs.
" Well I will see you guys later, LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! said Hayley cheerfully.
" Isn't she the best?" said Peep and Cheep while they both munched on watermelon....
PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT! I will do chapter 2 soon!