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Can ya change John Smith's fears/weaknesses? I want it to be changed to this, "Chaos. He wishes things to stay neat and orderly, basically he has OCD. Chaos is unpredictable, it can be the destroyer of his exsistence, and it can mess with his order. He wants to rid this earth of humans- the ones who causes that chaos."
Does he know he has OCD? 'Cause it would be funny if he didn't.
Yay, good job! I didn't have to lift a finger and this got done!
- Almighty Garjzla