another poem...

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by Stormhorse23, Feb 22, 2008.

  1. Stormhorse23

    Stormhorse23 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 22, 2007
    Indiana
    This is pretty much about recent happenings in my life and is kind of personal, but I'm sharing it anyways!

    Torn
    A tranquil sense of feeling envolopes me now.
    You give my life reason,
    Yet, you will never know how.
    I begin to notice small, simple things.
    When you give me that look,
    You also provide me with wings.
    Then it doesn't matter all that you've done.
    And you know it now,
    We've only just begun.
    The way you always want me around.
    You make me feel wanted.
    Even though, you bring me down.
    When you are happy, and I see your smile.
    I melt against you.
    So content, if only for a while.
    But when I'm alone, and I can think straight.
    You are never there when I cry.
    When it's convienent for you, until then, I must wait.
    But I know I can't stop, this is just too strong
    I'll just keep letting you use me.
    We just repeat, like a song.
    Before you lose interest and break me apart,
    I want you to know,
    What he did to my heart.
    It's just a game to him, he doesn't feel shame,
    He hides behind his lies,
    Stupid me, he's the same.
     
  2. countryboy

    countryboy Chillin' With My Peeps

    Oct 31, 2007
    Dump Him
     
  3. Stormhorse23

    Stormhorse23 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 22, 2007
    Indiana
    Quote:Which one? [​IMG]
     
  4. countryboy

    countryboy Chillin' With My Peeps

    Oct 31, 2007
    i dont know if its the tami flu or the flu but i went over it again and cant see two, all tho its moving, i can only see one sorry. it is good whether i decipher all of it or not.
     
  5. Stormhorse23

    Stormhorse23 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 22, 2007
    Indiana
    its confusing. you dont have to understand it. i seem to be the only one who can understand ALL of most of them.
     
  6. Stormhorse23

    Stormhorse23 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 22, 2007
    Indiana
    hey i put them on a website. its just the poems ive posted here so far, not any of the others. ill add more later. i THINK this is it. i used writerofword's idea for the title.

    www.rhythmofapawn.webs.com
     
  7. Royicus

    Royicus Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Jul 21, 2007
    Western Oregon
    I see you've written an entire poem in a different rhyme scheme [​IMG]

    Keep up your work!
     
  8. Stormhorse23

    Stormhorse23 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 22, 2007
    Indiana
    yep. its not that great. but i did it!
     
  9. ilovemychickies

    ilovemychickies Chillin' With My Peeps

    Good job Stormhorse! [​IMG]
     

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