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Anyone want to proof-read something for me really fast?

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by Smartie_Pants, Sep 6, 2009.

  1. Smartie_Pants

    Smartie_Pants Chillin' With My Peeps

    Oct 5, 2008
    Madisonville, KY
    I'm applying for a scholarship given out by the Horation Alger Association. The scholarships are for kids with low income, and on the application they ask you to write a short piece (100-300 words) "describing your adversity (low income) in detail and tell how it has motivated you to go to college a pursue a degree."

    I've finished my piece, but I'm not sure it's what they are looking for. I need someone to read it over and tell me if it feels right to them, and look for any errors I might have missed.

    Just post if you want to and I'll pm it to you. You can either pm me back or post your opinions and thoughts here, whichever you want to do.
     
  2. HEChicken

    HEChicken Overrun With Chickens

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    I'm game....

    experience proof-reader for my husband's business documents:D
     
  3. Smartie_Pants

    Smartie_Pants Chillin' With My Peeps

    Oct 5, 2008
    Madisonville, KY
    PM'd you.
     
  4. arabookworm

    arabookworm Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I'll proofread it
     
  5. Smartie_Pants

    Smartie_Pants Chillin' With My Peeps

    Oct 5, 2008
    Madisonville, KY
    PM Sent
     

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