Book writing? *sneek preveiw*

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by Chickengal505, Jul 31, 2011.

  1. Chickengal505

    Chickengal505 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 4, 2010
    Bolivia N.C
    Hi guys, I just wondered who here writes stories as a pass time? I do [​IMG] I'm working on one about a girl in a abusive home and a chicken with a physic connection to her [​IMG] random I know [​IMG]
     
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  2. Jane Jill Jack

    Jane Jill Jack Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I thought I would write up a book this Summer, but was too lazy. Once in a while I like to write poems or short stories.

    I like your book's theme. [​IMG]
     
  3. Chickengal505

    Chickengal505 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 4, 2010
    Bolivia N.C
    Quote:Thanks [​IMG]
     
  4. Spookwriter

    Spookwriter Overrun With Chickens

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    Write the book.

    Share with us what you want.

    Summertime, much to busy anymore.
    I write more in the cold weather.
     
  5. Chickengal505

    Chickengal505 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 4, 2010
    Bolivia N.C
    A sneek preveiw for those who want one [​IMG]

    A bird’s eye view


    Chapter one
    As soon as my beak broke the egg, I knew. She was near; I didn’t know who she was or even what she was. I just knew that she was important and she was near. After pondering her existence I turned my attention to the situation at hand, getting out of this darn shell.

    The light was blinding, I needed sunglasses. I tried to scream to this girl, to call her near. I tried “Who are …” My voice broke off. My eyes adjusted to the bright light and I marveled at the sight before me. Despite my training I couldn’t help but stare. An older chick chuckled at my awe. “Are you new son?” he asked. “Yes sir” I didn’t bother to correct his gender confusion. “Can you help me?” I asked him, “Well now, I don’t know. What do you need?” he replied in a mellow voice. “I feel a girl near…” I paused “I need to find her”. He marveled at me. At once he began screaming orders to the other guardians.
    We are not chickens, not inside anyway. We are souls, just random souls. We were trained to protect the humans and to blend in with the other mindless animals while using our magic to better their life. Sometimes we were put into other animals, mostly chickens. But that was irrelevant. Ben, the older guardian, had gathered the others and they were staring at me.
     
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  6. Chickengal505

    Chickengal505 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 4, 2010
    Bolivia N.C
    Anyone care to share their views? Or is it so bad you don't want to tell me? [​IMG]
     
  7. ChicksterJo

    ChicksterJo Chillin' With My Peeps

    Feb 19, 2011
    Grounded on Earth
    That is a such an interesting (and unique!) premise. The first sentence is really catching.
     
  8. Laurajean

    Laurajean Slightly Touched

    Apr 2, 2010
    New Hampshire
    Quote:Have you read my threads?!?! [​IMG] Mine just happen to be true. Truth is sometimes stranger than fiction but I do have a good ol' time telling them.
     
  9. Chickengal505

    Chickengal505 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 4, 2010
    Bolivia N.C
    Yes it's one of my more unique works [​IMG]
     
  10. sheaviance1

    sheaviance1 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Apr 7, 2010
    Tennessee
    I would buy it [​IMG]
     

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