*-'~Chicken boy~`- * A story about a boy that learns chicken speech.

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  1. SuperChickenDude327

    SuperChickenDude327 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Chicken boy
    This is my story. If I accidentally have a storyline like anyone else’s, then I am sorry, and will attempt to fix it. After I see where it was copied.

    (This story is about a boy who can speak to chickens, in their native language. It is told from the perspective of a young cockerel, who hatched with another cockerel and a pullet.)
    Chapter 1

    As soon as I felt a slight jostle, I knew it was time. Time to escape this miniature world that had nurtured me for so long. I moved, inside this thing, and began to break free. I was ready to take over the new world. After all, I had started out as a tiny speck, then grew into a huge thing that could barely be contained by this domed world. I rolled, and bashed the large, hard thing on the front of my face into its walls, attempting to escape. I bashed a hole in it, and saw a strange, grey landscape. I powered the hard thing on my face into it, breaking a larger hole in it. I opened the hard thing, and something rushed into it. I couldn’t see it, but I began to suck it in, then out, in, out. I looked hard, and saw a slight glow from a long tube.
    “Hey!” I yelled into it. I heard some voices.
    “Hello?” It’s voice was slightly higher pitched then my own.
    “Hey! Do you know what this…thing is on my face?” I yelled to the other creature, not knowing what it was. I rolled slightly and bashed another hole. I could see a field of small round things.
    “It’s called a beak.” I heard from a dome not too far away.
    “Now pipe down. I’m trying to save my energy to get out of this egg.” I watched as an egg wiggled, and I saw a lot of holes, sort of in a line.
    “What’s your name?” I heard the higher pitched voice ask.
    “Um…uh…Ryo. My name is Ryo.” I said, proud of myself for coming up with a name.
    “I’m Shelly, if you want to know.” Said the high pitched voice.
    “I’m out!”
    “Your name is Out?” I asked, confused.
    “No, I’m out of my egg.” I looked out of the hole in my egg, and saw a small creature with a hard beak, and little black things that disappeared from time to time.
    “I’m Rod, by the way. Now stop talking, and start pecking.” I did what he said, and began to peck at my egg. I was getting tired, fast.
    “I would help,” Rod said, “But I can’t walk. To weak.” I focused on pecking. I wanted OUT! I began to push myself out of the crack. All I managed to get through was my beak. I slipped it back in, and pushed with all my might. It began to crack. In less than a second,my legs gave way and I fell asleep. When I woke up, there were more cracks in it.
    “Rod, did you-“
    “Yep.” I looked through the crack and saw a huge creature. It was a little yellow, with black and white stripes on its back. In between those, it had reddish fuzz.
    “Yah!!! What are you? What did you do to Rod???” I yelled, pushing, and pecking with all my might in an attempt to get out. Suddenly, it cracked open, and I shot out! I flopped on another egg, and heard:
    “Ouch!” I looked down, and saw a flash of black and gold.
    “Shelly? Sorry.” I said, and pecked at her shell a little, helping her a little.
    “Thanks.” I looked up. There were long glowing tubes that twisted in crazy directions. That was all I could do right now, move my head. I was just plain yellow. I sighed. At least Shelly got some black in her. I fell asleep on that thought.
     
    Last edited: Dec 9, 2011
  2. SuperChickenDude327

    SuperChickenDude327 Chillin' With My Peeps

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  4. SuperChickenDude327

    SuperChickenDude327 Chillin' With My Peeps

    *Bumping to front so I can find it later*
     
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  6. SuperChickenDude327

    SuperChickenDude327 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Chapter 2

    I woke up a little while later, and stretched. I looked around, and saw the same eggs. Looking down, I saw that Shelly was out of her egg. “Shell?”
    I called.
    “Over here.”
    I glanced behind me, and saw two strange creatures. They both had a hard beak, but where yellow. One had black on it, and the other had black, white, and red on top of it’s yellow. “Hey, Ryo! How are you?”
    It began to move towards me with odd poles. “What are those?”
    I asked, looking at them. The creature stopped, and looked down at them. Then he laughed. “They’re called legs, Ryo!”
    It sounded like Rod, but didn’t look like him. I stood up on my ‘legs’, and walked across eggs towards him. The other creature – Shelly, probably – followed behind Rod, and I stopped. I had noticed on both of their legs was a red or pink band. Rod’s had markings that looked like COCKERAL. Shelly’s looked like PULLET. I had no idea what either of those meant, so I asked Rod. “Oh, so you haven’t gotten it yet? There’s this big-”
    Suddenly, the entire gray sky lifted up, and a massive thing reached down and grabbed me with five thick poles. “HELP!”
    I yelled, and began to kick at the poles. They didn’t have the fluff that I had, but boy, were they tough! I beat at them some more with my legs and long poles. I decided to call those ‘toes’. I beat at the huge poles with my toes, and even pecked them. After I gave up, I heard, “#W%F*L !&*GH F&R # ~H$~K. ^&* )*@! B% # ~&~K%R#L.”
    I had no idea what that meant, but a big red band was put onto my leg, and I was placed inside a box. I looked up, and tried to jump, but it didn’t work. Surprisingly , Shelly and Rod were inside with me. The huge yellowish shape went back up. I ran after it, attempting to peck it with my tiny beak, but I missed. Immediatly the sky closed up, and it was dark, the only light coming through, was from little holes in the wall. All of the sudden, we began moving, and I heard, “H%R%, !#K% !H%@% !& !H% ~#R. )^ (%PH%[email protected] &RD%R%D # J%[email protected]%^ G$#N! P*LL%!, # PH%&($X ~&~K%R#L, #(D # S*)#!R# ~&~K%R#L. (&W G%! )&V$(G.”
    I had no idea what that meant. Then I heard a loud clunk, and a loud vibration. I peeked out of a tiny hole, and saw a soft, greyish brown landscape. “Where are we?”
    asked Rod. “I have no idea.”
    I said, and heard a loud slam. Then, we began to move, again, and I hit my head on the rear wall. Then everything went black.
     
    Last edited: Dec 9, 2011
  7. SuperChickenDude327

    SuperChickenDude327 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Also, when a human talks, they can't understand until they're older.
     
  8. Symphony

    Symphony Vanilla, Little Airt Airt

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    Tip, if you don't mind:

    Try not to put a whole bunch of the same words in one paragraph.

    Example:

    I woke up a little while later, and stretched. I looked around, and saw the same eggs. Looking down, I saw that Shelly was out of her egg. “Shell?”
    I called.
    “Over here.”
    I glanced behind me, and saw two strange creatures. They both had a hard beak, but where yellow. One had black on it, and the other had black, white, and red on top of it’s yellow. “Hey, Ryo! How are you?”
    It began to move towards me with odd poles. “What are those?”
    I asked, looking at them. The creature stopped, and looked down at them. Then he laughed. “They’re called legs, Ryo!”
    It sounded like Rod, but didn’t look like him. I stood up on my ‘legs’, and walked across eggs towards him. The other creature – Shelly, probably – followed behind Rod, and I stopped. I had noticed on both of their legs was a red or pink band. Rod’s had markings that looked like COCKERAL. Shelly’s looked like PULLET. I had no idea what either of those meant, so I asked Rod. “Oh, so you haven’t gotten it yet? There’s this big-”
    Suddenly, the entire gray sky lifted up, and a massive thing reached down and grabbed me with five thick poles. “HELP!”
    I yelled, and began to kick at the poles. They didn’t have the fluff that I had, but boy, were they tough! I beat at them some more with my legs and long poles. I decided to call those ‘toes’. I beat at the huge poles with my toes, and even pecked them. Suddenly, I heard, “#W%F*L !&*GH F&R # ~H$~K. ^&* )*@! B% # ~&~K%R#L.”
    I had no idea what that meant, but a big red band was put onto my leg, and I was placed inside a box. I looked up, and tried to jump, but it didn’t work. Suddenly, Shelly and Rod were inside with me, and the huge thing went back up. I ran after it, and attempted to bite it with my tiny beak, but missed. Suddenly, the sky closed up, and it was dark, the only light coming from little holes in the wall. Suddenly, we began moving, and I heard, “H%R%, !#K% !H%@% !& !H% ~#R. )^ (%PH%[email protected] &RD%R%D # J%[email protected]%^ G$#N! P*LL%!, # PH%&($X ~&~K%R#L, #(D # S*)#!R# ~&~K%R#L. (&W G%! )&V$(G.”
    I had no idea what that meant, but we were moving again. I heard a loud clunk, and a loud vibration. I peeked out of a tiny hole, and saw a soft, greyish brown landscape. “Where are we?”
    asked Rod. “I have no idea.”
    I said, and heard a loud slam. Suddenly, we began to move.


    And...


    As soon as I felt a slight jostle, I knew it was time. Time to escape this miniature world that had nurtured me for so long. I moved, inside this thing, and began to break free. I was ready to take over the new world. After all, I had started out as a tiny speck, then grew into a huge thing that could barely be contained by this domed world. I rolled, and bashed the large, hard thing on the front of my face into its walls, attempting to escape. I bashed a hole in it, and saw a strange, grey landscape. I powered the hard thing on my face into it, breaking a larger hole in it. I opened the hard thing, and something rushed into it. I couldn’t see it, but I began to suck it in, then out, in, out. I looked hard, and saw a slight glow from a long tube.
    “Hey!” I yelled into it. Suddenly, I heard some voices.
    “Hello?” It’s voice was slightly higher pitched then my own.
    “Hey! Do you know what this…thing is on my face?” I yelled to the other creature, not knowing what it was. I rolled slightly and bashed another hole. I could see a field of small round things.
    “It’s called a beak.” I heard from a dome not too far away.
    “Now pipe down. I’m trying to save my energy to get out of this egg.” I watched as an egg wiggled, and I saw a lot of holes, sort of in a line.
    “What’s your name?” I heard the higher pitched voice ask.
    “Um…uh…Ryo. My name is Ryo.” I said, proud of myself for coming up with a name.
    “I’m Shelly, if you want to know.” Said the high pitched voice.
    “I’m out!”
    “Your name is Out?” I asked, confused.
    “No, I’m out of my egg.” I looked out of the hole in my egg, and saw a small creature with a hard beak, and little black things that disappeared from time to time.
    “I’m Rod, by the way. Now stop talking, and start pecking.” I did what he said, and began to peck at my egg. I was getting tired, fast.
    “I would help,” Rod said, “But I can’t walk. To weak.” I focused on pecking. I wanted OUT! I began to push myself out of the crack. All I managed to get through was my beak. I slipped it back in, and pushed with all my might. It began to crack. Suddenly, my legs gave way and I fell asleep. When I woke up, there were more cracks in it.
    “Rod, did you-“
    “Yep.” I looked through the crack and saw a huge creature. It was a little yellow, with black and white stripes on its back. In between those, it had reddish fuzz.
    “Yah!!! What are you? What did you do to Rod???” I yelled, pushing, and pecking with all my might in an attempt to get out. Suddenly, it cracked open, and I came out very suddenly. I flopped in another egg, and heard,
    “Ouch!” I looked down, and saw a flash of black and gold.
    “Shelly? Sorry.” I said, and pecked at her shell a little, helping her a little.
    “Thanks.” I looked up. There were long glowing tubes that twisted in crazy directions. That was all I could do right now, move my head. I was just plain yellow. I sighed. At least Shelly got some black in her. I fell asleep on that thought.
     
  9. Kevin565

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  10. SuperChickenDude327

    SuperChickenDude327 Chillin' With My Peeps

    [​IMG] I saw that after I posted! I'll fix it later. Thanks for the tip! [​IMG]
     

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