Hadassah and Sequoia

Discussion in 'Hobbies' started by Chicks Galore3, Dec 4, 2013.

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  1. Chicks Galore3

    Chicks Galore3 Artistic Bird Nut Premium Member

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    So, me and my pen pal in Maryland started writing a story early this summer when we got to meet each other. (Amazing.) Thanks to technology, we have been able to continue it 48 driving hours away from each other. This is the jist of the story, please tell me what you think of it! This is just a part of the beginning, I'll put the complete beginning up soon. (I don't have access to the second part right now.)

    “Make sure to pin a note on them saying their names.” Cindy reminded her fellow maid servant. Sylvia sighed. “I wish we didn’t have to do this.” The two maidservants wrapped the two princesses in warm wool blankets and tightly held the two infant princesses in their arms. Everything in the two kingdoms of Allitrott and Bendstrom had gone wrong. It all started when Princess Fae and Prince Curtis married against Fae’s Mother, Victoria's, will. When she realized what they had done, she was outraged. She took Fae back to the kingdom of Allitrott forcefully, threatening Price Curtis with war. Fae pleaded with her husband to let her go, that the kingdom of Bendstrom was more important. “For you, my love. But I will get you back!” was Prince Curtises mournful and determined promise. No sooner did Queen Victoria get Fae back to Allitrot, then Princess Fae learned she was going to give birth to twins. Immediately, Fae secretly sent Prince Curtis a letter telling him. Fae wanted him to reply giving her one girl name and a boy's. Victoria was furious about the upcoming birth. There was a rumor she was going to get rid of the children, though no one dared to ask how. Her personal maids tried to convince her to change her mind, pleading for the babies’ lives. Victoria wouldn’t even consider anything else, threatening to throw anyone in jail who spoke of anything of the sort again. When Cindy asked if Victoria would do it to her own child, Victoria was only more determined. So, Sylvia and Cindy made up a plan to rescue the two princesses.

    HA! I got it to paste. >:D
     
    Last edited: Dec 5, 2013
  2. drumstick diva

    drumstick diva Still crazy after all these years. Premium Member

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    I just found this and liked it. Isn't 'Hadassah ' a Jewish name tho?
     
  3. Chicks Galore3

    Chicks Galore3 Artistic Bird Nut Premium Member

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    Thank you! Yes, it is a Jewish name. I didn't know that at the time I picked it. I just loved the name. :)
     
  4. Chicks Galore3

    Chicks Galore3 Artistic Bird Nut Premium Member

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    I fixed a couple things that weren't right, so it's a tad better.
     

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