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Left in the Forest~ By miss heny *part 3 of chapter 2 is up!*

Discussion in 'Games, Jokes, and Fun!' started by miss heny, Oct 5, 2011.

  1. miss heny

    miss heny Genetic Expert in learning Premium Member

    Left in the Forest (the name idea was from Cpprpnny19) is about a girl that was left in the forest to die at the age of five, she lived thro it and now we come back to her at the age of 12 and see how she lived thro the forest thro her eyes.


    Chapter one


    My past is misty and hard to remember, i was left in the forest when i was young, i think i was five. For most of my life i lived in the forest, work and hunting, getting past the harsh winter, each season past, and i grew older, getting use to being by my self, my parents left me there to die, but i didn't. I remember a face, a loving motherly face, then it turn to stone, angry and mad, who am I? I don't know, I lived in the forest, with a horse that is older then me, and trying to live, not let the earth swallow me. The first day I meet one of my kind was I was out hunting, it was the Months of Falling Leafs, when I heard a bang, and saw the buck I was stalking fall over, dead. What came out of the bushes shocked me,a Human, about 18 or so with blonde hair came out with a thing, something like a magic wand. He left then came back later with magic cart made of metal with four wheels with out horses pulling it. He threw the buck into the back of the thing and drove off, I watch with a odd feeling, when my horse, Zelda came over and nudge my back, I sigh "come on boy, we better check the traps"
    Of all the traps, only one had caught something, a squirrel. Well better then acorn soup again, i took it out of the trap and kill it "come on Zelda" i sigh and get on the back of the horse and ride to my camp for the Months of Falling Leafs and the Months of Falling White things. I start to clean my dinner, when one of my fishing alarm goes off, the alarm was nothing more then some tine cans, but i went to check any way. I pull the line, and dragged in a small 5 pound bass, i slightly smack my lips and start to clean the fish too. When cleaned i start a fire and filled up my old metal bucket i found a few years ago with water. When the fire was nice and toasty i put the bucket on top and start to cut the meat, soon the water was boiling and i put the meat in the water with a few herbs. son the soup was done and i had to remove the bucket with a stick so i wouldn't burn myself.
    When i start to eat, the bush moved, i mutter a curse and said aloud "BloodyDeath, come forth before i put another arrow into you rum." A wolf that could of been white comes out, most of it fur was blood red, it eyes gold, with a single nasty scar over it right eye, it growls "Mala, you know the forest laws, no fighting near a river," I rolled my eyes "well then why come near my camp, which is by a river." I pointed out, Bloodydeath snarl and called me some rude names in wolf, of which I wont tell here. Zelda paws at ground and glares at the wolf "leave, before i trample you into a bloody pancake" the wolf growls but runs off, I look around and get back to eating my soup, sooner or later they will attack I thought, sometimes i wish i was raise normally, but hey, i wouldn't have Zelda, I sigh again before finishing my meal and head to go asleep.


    Chapter two~ The Meeting

    I awoke in a start with something pink in my face, I grabbed it and a big swak! cam from it. I jumped and Zelda trampled it, later I found out it was a neon pink silkie. I yawn and do a sharp hawk call, soon a old gray red tail hawk came over, i point at the body "there Firstone, free breakfast" Firstrone smiled with kindness "thank you, Lostone" the hawk swoop down and starts to eat. Zelda goes off for a drink, and I followed, while there I looked into the water as if a mirror, and start to comb my hand through my white hair, and yes, I did say white hair, I also have sea blue eyes. Zelda watches the forest, his Blue eyes searching, and was worried "come on Mala, the forest meeting is about to start" I sigh, and get on his back "another big fight over land, again" we ride off into the forest. Birds were quite for once, but that what was worrying me. We get to the meeting point, know by all forest livers as Meeting Point Rock, and already a right was going on between the rival pack leaders.
    Before I could break up the fight a big old gruff bear comes out of the shadow, his voice booms "This place is for peace, not to kill, for blood has never been spilled here since the first meeting!" the wolf coward in a corner, we all know that the bear temper was bad. A mountain lion was on a rock grooming it self "why, Hullo, Silverflower" the bear ignores the lion, which I dont blame him "The meeting of the Months of Falling Leaves shall began. Bloodydeath and Midnightmoon, it is time to swap lands for your kind, is it not?" Midnightmoon growls but said calmly "yes, but Bloodydeath wont do it! She declared that they want to stay on there land permanently." Silverflower glares at Bloodydeath "And break the old ways?! how dare she" I was sitting in a corner watching, i rarely have anything to say most of the time, so i more or less watch the meeting as if a TV show.
    Silverflower sigh after the big talk about the old ways "It is about the time for when the beast the slept is awaking, for you who dont know the story listen carefully" I wounder what is going on when Silverflower started "Long ago into the mountains a beast humans call a 'dragon', but we call it a beast,And now it is awaking, looking for prey. This winter be careful, and watch the sky for any signs, if there is a sign of it, run and hide. Meeting dismiss!" soon the animals departed,me and zelda were soon left alone, we go riding into the forest, watching the sky, waiting to see what happen. When we got to the camp a roar could be heard, both me and zelda ran to the hidding cave, when the beast landed in front of it.
     
    Last edited: Oct 11, 2011
  2. pekinduck<3er

    pekinduck<3er Chillin' With My Peeps

    It's good but has some puntuation problems but Really Good! [​IMG]
     
  3. miss heny

    miss heny Genetic Expert in learning Premium Member

    pekinduck<3er :

    It's good but has some puntuation problems but Really Good! [​IMG]

    ya, i was truelly guessing on that [​IMG]
     
  4. pekinduck<3er

    pekinduck<3er Chillin' With My Peeps

    Quote:ya, i was truelly guessing on that [​IMG]

    lol I do to XD but good job [​IMG]
     
  5. miss heny

    miss heny Genetic Expert in learning Premium Member

    pekinduck<3er :

    Quote:ya, i was truelly guessing on that [​IMG]

    lol I do to XD but good job [​IMG]

    should i make another chapter? [​IMG]
     
  6. pekinduck<3er

    pekinduck<3er Chillin' With My Peeps

    Quote:lol I do to XD but good job [​IMG]

    should i make another chapter? [​IMG]

    Yesh [​IMG]
     
  7. miss heny

    miss heny Genetic Expert in learning Premium Member

    pekinduck<3er :

    Quote:should i make another chapter? [​IMG]

    Yesh [​IMG]

    okay, and uh, go RP draco please [​IMG]
     
  8. miss heny

    miss heny Genetic Expert in learning Premium Member

    Of all the traps, only one had caught something, a squirrel. Well better then acorn soup again, i took it out of the trap and kill it "come on Zelda" i sigh and get on the back of the horse and ride to my camp for the Months of Falling Leafs and the Months of Falling White things. I start to clean my dinner, when one of my fishing alarm goes off, the alarm was nothing more then some tine cans, but i went to check any way. I pull the line, and dragged in a small 5 pound bass, i slightly smack my lips and start to clean the fish too. When cleaned i start a fire and filled up my old metal bucket i found a few years ago with water. When the fire was nice and toasty i put the bucket on top and start to cut the meat, soon the water was boiling and i put the meat in the water with a few herbs. son the soup was done and i had to remove the bucket with a stick so i wouldn't burn myself.
     
  9. <3ChickenForever

    <3ChickenForever Fire Is Catching

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    Wow very good start! [​IMG]
     
  10. miss heny

    miss heny Genetic Expert in learning Premium Member

    <3ChickenForever :

    Wow very good start! [​IMG]

    [​IMG] really, writing it not one of my good points [​IMG]
     

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