MY ( draft ) Story of Eko The chicken.

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  1. yankeedoodle300

    yankeedoodle300 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 22, 2011
    Chicken Heaven
    This is more of a Story/poem mix than a story. I hope you like the Prologue

    Prologue

    The egg. One of my worst enemy's so far in my life.
    I Just can't get out of this prison of a thing.
    I tried and tried, but i can't hurt this white oval.
    Clink, Clink,
    At last! a small crack! " Cheep Cheep Cheep "
    I squeal, for i have victory in this endless battle.
    I hear my Siblings, Cheeping with victory also.
    My life has just begun, but I know that this
    is the first of many battles i must overcome in
    my life...



    So do you like it?
    A lot of people are writing stories, so i thought I'd give it a shot.

    ... Yankee ...
     
  2. yankeedoodle300

    yankeedoodle300 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 22, 2011
    Chicken Heaven
    Part 1 Names


    " its okay, its okay " My mother cooed to other chicks around me.
    I was Out, Freedom Finally! then suddenly i heard a new voice say
    " Whats your name, New kid? "
    I heard my sibling say.
    " I don't know. whats yours? "
    " My name is Punker, like a punk. "
    The little chick said.
    " hmmmm, i don't know what My name is... "
    i said thoughtfully. " what kinda stuff do you like to do, Bro? "
    " I am a girl. and i Love to talk. I love to talk!"
    I said twice. " Ok, " said Punker, " How about Echo, not like E-C-H-O, but E-K-O."
    " Nice " I told him.'

    Eko. i Repeated in my head.

    Well, Now i had a Name, but,
    a name is just a name...
    No more than that
     
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  3. yankeedoodle300

    yankeedoodle300 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 22, 2011
    Chicken Heaven
    Part 2. The Box


    I Want to Go,
    I was free of my egg,
    but not of this cage,
    or brooder, as some call it.

    Punker was by my side, when a Hand,
    Came down and picked me up
    and put me down,
    with lots of other chicks.
    I called for Punker, but he did not answer.

    My stomach Churned as I thought,
    What if Punker did Not get put in the same box?

    We where put in a Dark Place,
    Where Hundreds of other Chicks got put.

    Then the earth Was shaken,
    Or was it even the earth?

    Was it a Box of doom,

    Or a new life awaiting?


    Please Comment
     
    Last edited: Oct 12, 2011
  4. BlueLagoonRabbitry

    BlueLagoonRabbitry Chillin' With My Peeps

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    So far what Im getting from it is the baby hatched and its in the hatchery?
     
  5. luvinmybirds

    luvinmybirds Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Not sure where you're going with this, but continue to let us see what is going to happen.................................[​IMG]
     
  6. yankeedoodle300

    yankeedoodle300 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 22, 2011
    Chicken Heaven
    Okay.

    Part 3

    The Opening



    I Looked up, when a face was looking down,
    I looks like the face of the hand.

    He singles ME out,
    and picks me up.

    I am about 25 weeks old now,
    And Punker has long passed my thoughts.

    He puts me in with Larger chickens,
    and the others follow after.
    I am Comforted by the presence of other hens.

    I feel Like I'm at home now.

    And i sure hope it last.


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    BlueLagoonRabbitry, you are right about the story line so far.

    And this is a write as i go book, so please don't try to tie in the past with the future.... to much [​IMG]
     
  7. yankeedoodle300

    yankeedoodle300 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 22, 2011
    Chicken Heaven
    I Dont know where i am going, either
     
  8. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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  9. yankeedoodle300

    yankeedoodle300 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 22, 2011
    Chicken Heaven
    Quote:Do you like it, PolishSilkies45?
     
  10. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Quote:Do you like it, PolishSilkies45?

    Of course! Its really interesting.
     

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