My new page

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by GloriaH, Jan 6, 2008.

  1. GloriaH

    GloriaH Chillin' With My Peeps

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  2. okiechick57

    okiechick57 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Nice page........only 3 misspelled words ;)Apploosa/app A loosa and inprint/ i M print, and avalibility/availability
    otherwise.....very nice and easy to read....love the background
     
    Last edited: Jan 6, 2008
  3. dutchman

    dutchman Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Very nice GloriaH. Enjoyed the pics. Dutchman.
     
  4. jeaucamom

    jeaucamom Chillin' With My Peeps

    Oct 1, 2007
    Ophir, CA
    First paragraph, We imprint all of out (should be our)..... Otherwise, very nice page.
     
  5. CarriBrown

    CarriBrown Overrun With Chickens Premium Member

    "Day Old SWEDISH Duckling", not Sweedish. [​IMG]
     
  6. tiffanyh

    tiffanyh Chillin' With My Peeps

    Apr 8, 2007
    Connecticut
    ...and temperment ...

    very sharp though!
     
  7. 65browneyes

    65browneyes Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Only other one I see is first paragraph, last sentence, "We belive ......." beliEve.

    Nice page! Thanks for sharing.
     
  8. horsewishr

    horsewishr Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Quote:ALMOST, tiffany. It's TemperAment [​IMG]

    My inner English major will now come out:

    In paragraph #1:
    feeding out animals should be feeding our animals
    forefront is one word, not two
    resistance-free should be hyphenated
    inprint out animals should be imprint our animals
    belive should be beliEve
    I'd put a comma after companions

    In pragraph #2
    along with our layers should be in addition to our layers

    In paragraph #5
    Poustry Book Store should be Poultry Book Store
    It's is should be It is

    Don't feel bad, Gloria. It's virtually impossible to proofread your own work. Your brain will read what you meant to type--regardless of what your fingers actually banged out.

    And the page is BEAUTIFUL. I'll trade you editing for design help any day!
     
  9. GloriaH

    GloriaH Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I have been fooling with this all morning. Now I can't get it to show pictures. Look again and tell me what you think. Thanks for all your help. Has anyone ever used google pages before and can you give me some hints. HELP!
     
  10. horsewishr

    horsewishr Chillin' With My Peeps

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    hmm. the picutures did disappear.

    When I edit documents, I always save the new version under an alternate file name. that way if I goof something up, I still have the old version to revert to.
     

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