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New poem!

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by Stormhorse23, Mar 3, 2008.

  1. Stormhorse23

    Stormhorse23 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 22, 2007
    Indiana
    I'm trying to use a different rhyming scheme. Ive not quite gotten it the way i want it though. heres another one


    The Vampire
    He emerges from the shadows
    I'd forgotten how he'd move
    Two icy pieces of steel
    Rebel against them, we both lose
    Begging your own body
    Please, just one more breath
    I warned you, my ignorant friend
    Struggling is oh so vain
    When we all come to an end
     
  2. lacyloo

    lacyloo Cooped Up

    May 26, 2007
    north florida
    wonderful [​IMG]
     
  3. ilovemychickies

    ilovemychickies Chillin' With My Peeps

    Good job!
     

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