Poem Artists~ I know you are out there

This one I wrote a few weeks ago

And its called
"That Sweet Aroma"

"Nothing should ever be taken for granite. But enjoy the simple things. Nothing or nobody should be taken unlikely. But be cherished. Love and life is to short.
The flower you smell should be breathed in deep, as soon as winter comes it is no more. But will come back again in the new year. A new beginning, to leave its sweet aroma in the air once again."


Mine basically talks about how everybody takes things to lightly. Remembering everything, even small
Its those things that make our day Brighter
 
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Ok I know I am wierd and sometimes nuts. But don't hold back....we all have an alter ego artist thing going on LOL

Kind of like me
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I didn't want you to go
but i didn't beg you to stay.
ain't no sense in hangin round
when the smile you wear is worn upside down.

your lips are like water
i'm drownin in your lake
turn your brown eyes away from me
there's not much more that i can take.

i gave you everything
you didn't do the same
so clouded in your preception
i didn't turn away.
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is this heart ache
wrapped round my viens?
blood red and stains?
stealing each breath i make?

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As long as there is someone else
lost along this land
he has sent his shepard out
to find his last lamb.

it's only through his blood we're washed
made clean of all sins
i invite thee Christ Jesus
to the depths of my soul within

only You can save me from this pain
only You can make me whole again
and i know it's Your Spirit inside
and i know I was saved when You were crusified.

As long as there is war and pain
as long as evil remains
I will keep my trust in You
let my spirit guide the day.

only You can save me from this pain
only You can make me whole again
and i know it's your beauty inside
and i know i was saved when You were crusified...

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Nice! I basically understood it quite nicely.
And it had allot of meaning to it, Thats the kind of stuff I like....


Mine is always hipothetical LOL

I love to see the different syles and I am glad you shared it with us.
 
Seeing the title I thought of my friend Elizabeth who is a very good poet.

Nonetheless, here's one I just whipped up...

Shadow and Light
Shades the hearts
Of all who walk among us.
Yet my heart is light-
-A feather floating-
When I pass you
And heavy as the blackest night
When you do not reply.
 
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