Poem Artists~ I know you are out there

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  1. stephys_fluffybutts

    stephys_fluffybutts Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Anybody have an interest in poems or like writeing them?

    Please post your poems
    Please add their meanings as well
     
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  2. debilorrah

    debilorrah The Great Guru of Yap Premium Member

    I am not a poet
    And yes I know it.
     
  3. stephys_fluffybutts

    stephys_fluffybutts Chillin' With My Peeps

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    This one I wrote a few weeks ago

    And its called
    "That Sweet Aroma"

    "Nothing should ever be taken for granite. But enjoy the simple things. Nothing or nobody should be taken unlikely. But be cherished. Love and life is to short.
    The flower you smell should be breathed in deep, as soon as winter comes it is no more. But will come back again in the new year. A new beginning, to leave its sweet aroma in the air once again."


    Mine basically talks about how everybody takes things to lightly. Remembering everything, even small
    Its those things that make our day Brighter
     
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  4. stephys_fluffybutts

    stephys_fluffybutts Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I have seen so many artists on here. And I wouldnt mind drawing out the poem writers.
    I know they are out there
     
  5. stephys_fluffybutts

    stephys_fluffybutts Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Ok I know I am wierd and sometimes nuts. But don't hold back....we all have an alter ego artist thing going on LOL

    Kind of like me [​IMG]
     
  6. ChevygirlBeth

    ChevygirlBeth Chillin' With My Peeps

    I used to write poetry when I was in high school and even got some published somewhere along the way. I haven't written any in a very long time now.
     
  7. maplesky7

    maplesky7 Flock Mistress

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    N. IL.
    I didn't want you to go
    but i didn't beg you to stay.
    ain't no sense in hangin round
    when the smile you wear is worn upside down.

    your lips are like water
    i'm drownin in your lake
    turn your brown eyes away from me
    there's not much more that i can take.

    i gave you everything
    you didn't do the same
    so clouded in your preception
    i didn't turn away.
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    is this heart ache
    wrapped round my viens?
    blood red and stains?
    stealing each breath i make?

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    As long as there is someone else
    lost along this land
    he has sent his shepard out
    to find his last lamb.

    it's only through his blood we're washed
    made clean of all sins
    i invite thee Christ Jesus
    to the depths of my soul within

    only You can save me from this pain
    only You can make me whole again
    and i know it's Your Spirit inside
    and i know I was saved when You were crusified.

    As long as there is war and pain
    as long as evil remains
    I will keep my trust in You
    let my spirit guide the day.

    only You can save me from this pain
    only You can make me whole again
    and i know it's your beauty inside
    and i know i was saved when You were crusified...

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    me,
    g
     
  8. stephys_fluffybutts

    stephys_fluffybutts Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Nice! I basically understood it quite nicely.
    And it had allot of meaning to it, Thats the kind of stuff I like....


    Mine is always hipothetical LOL

    I love to see the different syles and I am glad you shared it with us.
     
  9. HorseFeathers

    HorseFeathers Frazzled

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    Southern Maine
    Seeing the title I thought of my friend Elizabeth who is a very good poet.

    Nonetheless, here's one I just whipped up...

    Shadow and Light
    Shades the hearts
    Of all who walk among us.
    Yet my heart is light-
    -A feather floating-
    When I pass you
    And heavy as the blackest night
    When you do not reply.
     
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