Post a rap or a poem you made here!

Discussion in 'Games, Jokes, and Fun!' started by Telamon, Oct 2, 2011.

  1. Telamon

    Telamon Chillin' With My Peeps

    May 31, 2010
    I have no idea.
    Post it, I wanna hear some catchy lyrics [​IMG]
     
  2. ILuvMyPetChickens

    ILuvMyPetChickens Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Why did you waste your time on me?

    Verse One:
    How come I approached you? Why did I come up to you? I've should have dumped you. I could see through eyes that lie. I'm glad it didn't work out. Cause your game were getting old and I was fooled. I don't play by the guys rules. I should have went with my gut I thought you were different but I am still not having any luck. You took your pick that you will soon regret. Don't come crawling back to me when your upset with no rest.

    Chorus:
    Why waste your time on me? It was plain to see your jealousy. You wanted her back on bending knee. I didn't want to be more than friends but I guess this is how the story ends.
    Why did you waste your time on me? I knew you loved her that I could see but at the same time you yell at me. Tell me why did you waste your time on me? Your far ignorant than me.

    Verse Two:
    How come you think your better than me? How come you think you rule the world? You can't even stick to one girl. You always have one thing on your mind. You don't even know what love is. You call youself a man but in reality you're a coward. No wonderrour relationship went sour.(Oooh) (OOh) (Your never coming back here)

    Chorus 2x

    Verse Three:
    How come you let me hate you? It was a mistake to date you. You think you're an industrialist with just one kiss. You put me through an obstacle and I fought till the end.I will not defend your misfortune with women. Actin' like your swimmin' in 'em. You dove right in for the first chick. Best believe ain't no chick going to fall for your I'm so charming and I get whatever I want Bs.

    (Oooh) Don't gotta deal with it anymore
    (Oooh) (OOh) Im glad you walked out the door
    All you do is control(control)
     
  3. silky_3699

    silky_3699 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 15, 2011
    My Own Realm!!!
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    that is fantastic!!! [​IMG]
     
  4. ILuvMyPetChickens

    ILuvMyPetChickens Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Thanks I have so many more! I couldn't find my poem that I wrote about the 8th grade. I"ve been writing since I was 12.
     
  5. ChickLover98

    ChickLover98 The Chicken Princess

    Apr 24, 2010
    Pennsylvania
    I wrote a poem about my algebra teacher... It's not so nice... [​IMG]
     
  6. frostbite

    frostbite Chillin' With My Peeps

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    The "Ain't-got-no-right-to-sing-the Blues"

    "I woke up this mornin'
    and everything was fine.
    My man done up and left me
    so's he could get to work on time
    My friends don't wanna hear it,
    They gonna slap me when I whine!

    I got the Got-no-right-to-sing-the blues, boo hoo hoo!
     
  7. ILuvMyPetChickens

    ILuvMyPetChickens Chillin' With My Peeps

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    lol
     
  8. Amigo

    Amigo Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 13, 2011
    Your house!
    I don't like rap!
    Who sings rap I want to slap
    And if you disagree
    I will take you away
    Where you'll never be!

    [​IMG]
     
  9. ILuvMyPetChickens

    ILuvMyPetChickens Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I don't really rap. Just write lyrics
     
  10. Magic Birdie

    Magic Birdie Overrun With Chickens

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    I'm going to make one up here

    Hmm...

    Ooh, how about a song? I made one up a long time ago, to the tune of the eerie canal song, you might not know it if you're not from NY.

    I have a mule
    Her name's not Sal
    Zero miles on the freaky canal.
    She's a horrible worker and an evil pal
    Zero miles on the freaky canal.
    She is so evil in her way
    Because she will not pull my hay
    So I will make her work all day
    From Albany to Buffalo
    Low bridge,
    Sal will not go down
    Low bridge,
    So I guess she'll have to drown.
    And she'll never know her neighbor
    She'll never know her pal
    Cause she'll never navigate on the freaky canal

    It's based on the original, and it's really weird. I was bored, ok? I do like it, though...
     

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