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  1. Feather Hearts

    Feather Hearts Chillin' With My Peeps

    All BYC&Games Rules apply
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    Here you can have fun, chat warriors, post quizzes and do anything warrior cats related.
    *Also* You can advertise RPs here too, (With
    @Cluckcluck1215 's roleplay Heat Of Battle being noticibly the biggest warriors RP here on BYC, there are some that are just starting off)
    My Warrior Cats into the wild:
    Is Bluestar a good leader?
    Is Tigerclaw a great example of a villian?
    Do you prefer Leafpool or Squirrelflight?

    MORE COMING SOON!!!

    Omen Of The Stars Q&A
    Dovewing or Ivypool who is the better cat?
    Leopardstar or Mistystar wich leader do you prefer?
    Do you think it was a good idea for the Erins to use the Dark Forest again?
     
    Last edited: Mar 27, 2017
  2. Feather Hearts

    Feather Hearts Chillin' With My Peeps

    My warriors story and cats so far
    *Please note* This story is a work in progress and a few of the chapters are not yet finished, it is not complete netheir are the characters,
    PLEASE DON'T COPY, I HAVE SPENT HOURS WORKING ON THIS!
    MossClan
    Leader: Flamestar- Dark ginger tabby tom with green eyes and one white paw
    Deputy: Sunstream- Bright golden she-cat with ginger stripes and green eyes
    (Apprentice GorsePaw)
    Medicine Cats:
    Mistleaf- Gray she-cat with blue eyes and a white paw
    Sparrowpaw- Pale brown tabby tom with green eyes

    Warriors:
    Leafheart- Caramel tabby she-cat with green eyes and a white belly
    Brackenclaw- Golden tom with green eyes
    BerrpPool- Dark silver tabby dappled with white, half her face is white, dark blue eyes
    (Apprentice SilverPaw)
    Riverfang- Silver she-cat with long white fangs and black stripes
    (Apprentice Icepaw)
    Flintshard- Metallic dark gray tom with blazing amber eyes
    (Apprentice BramblePaw)
    Batwing- Dark Brown tom with even darker tabby stripes and yellow eyes
    Thistlefur- Brown tom with spiky fur, green eyes and a white tail tip
    Blazingheart- Dark ginger tom, at the end of each hair is white, white paws, tail tip and chest, green eyes
    (Apprentice CrimsonPaw)
    Daisymist- Cream tabby with white muzzle, paws, chest, belly and tail-tip light blue eyes
    (Apprentice FlowerPaw)
    Bluestream- Blue-gray she cat with silver flecks and pale gray-blue eyes
    Shadowstreak- Gray tom with black spots on his back one over his eye and his ears he has green eyes
    Nightbreeze- Black she-cat with striking blue eyes

    Queens:
    Fernmist- Gray she-cat with darker flecks and green eyes
    Mother to BlazingHeart’s kits
    (LilyKit-Pale ginger-she-kit with white paws, BlackKit- Dark ginger tom with gray ears and one black paw)

    AmberFern- Ginger she-cat with gray paws and green eyes expecting Flintshade’s kits
    (Apprentice Flowerpaw)
    SnowTail- Pale gray she-cat with darker leopard spots white ears and a white tail Expecting BatWing’s kits

    Apprentices:
    GorsePaw- Wiry gray tabby tom with green eyes
    SilverPaw-Silver-she-cat with white paws and a black tail tip with green eyes
    BramblePaw-Dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
    IcePaw- Gray tortoiseshell she-cat with white dapples and ice blue eyes
    CrimsonPaw- Dark red she-cat with a striking white star on her forehead and gray-blue eyes
    FlowerPaw- Caramel coloured tabby with white chest, muzzle and belly with green eyes

    Elders:
    PebblePelt- Mottled gray she-cat with blue eyes

    NightClan
    Leader: MistStar- Gray she-cat with white muzzle, chest, belly paws and tail-tip with aqua eyes
    Deputy: Thornfang- Dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes he has claw-marks over his eyes

    Medicine Cats:
    RedPool- Red tom with brown eyes
    GrayPaw- Gray tom with a black paw and gray-blue eyes

    Warriors:
    Graystep- Dark gray tom with scruffy fur and brown eyes
    Honeypool- Golden she-cat with white belly and brown eyes
    Shadowblaze- Black tom with white paws and a white tail tip with blue eyes
    (Apprentice Blackpaw)
    Briarmist- Tawny brown tabby she-cat with white paws and ice-blue eyes
    Seedfur- Gray she-cat with brown spots and green eyes
    (Apprentice Owlpaw)
    Hollyltail- Black she-cat with red tabby patches and a red tabby tail she has amber eyes
    Lilyfur- Snow white she-cat with with gray and black spots and blue eyes
    Lizardstreak- Gray tom with black streaks and jungle green eyes
    (Apprentice Dawnpaw)
    Honeypelt- Light golden tabby she-cat with white chest with green eyes
    Doveheart- Gray she-cat with white muzzle, chest, belly, paws and tail-tip with yellow eyes
    Whitemist- White she-cat with very pale gray stripes and blue eyes
    Coalspots- Chalky gray tom with black face and black paws with brown eyes
    (Apprentice Poppypaw)
    Queens:
    Streamsong- Gray tabby she-cat with dark stripes and dark ears with green eyes mother to Coalspot’s kits:
    (Larkkit- Sandy brown she-cat with darker spots and brown eyes
    Tawnykit- Tawny tortoiseshell, white and black she-cat with amber eyes
    Graykit- Chalky gray tom with dark gray flecks and brown eyes)
    Ripplefur- Shiny silver she-cat with black stripes and yellow eyes(Expecting Graystep’s kits)
    Clearflower- Pale tabby she-cat with darker brown stripes and blue eyes(Expecting Shadowblaze’s kits)
    Ivywater- Sleek pale gray tabby she-cat with black stripes and sky-blue eyes

    Apprentices:
    Blackpaw- White tom with a black paw and green eyes
    Owlpaw- Long furred gray tom with brown and russet spots and yellow eyes
    Dawnpaw- Cream she-cat with purplish eyes and a white ear
    Poppypaw- White she-cat dappled with red tabby with blue eyes

    Elders:
    Prickletail- Prickly brown tabby tom with blue eyes
    Tigerleap- Once pretty ginger tabby she-cat with green eyes and black ears
    Swiftsky- Pale gray she-cat with blue eyes and black stripes


    LightningClan
    Leader: Stormstar- Dark gray tabby tom with white ears and blue eyes
    (Apprentice Riverpaw)
    Deputy: Shadowgaze- Sleek black she-cat with yellow eyes and a white star on her forehead
    Medicine cats:
    Fawnspots- Small brown tabby she-cat with white spots and green eyes
    Ferntail- Dark brown she-cat with green eyes

    Warriors:
    Brightfire- Dark ginger tom with white paws and green eyes
    (Apprentice Lionpaw)
    Sweetflower- Pinkish ginger she-cat with long fluffy fur and blue eyes
    Whitetuft- White thick furred she-cat with amber eyes
    Pinespots- White tom with reddish ginger spots and green eyes
    Tanglefur- Black tom with tangled fur and yellow eyes
    (Apprentice Pebblepaw)
    Dewwhisker- Pale gray she-cat with long, feathery, whiskers and glassy blue eyes
    Pearlfur- Shiny cream tabby she-cat with soft violet eyes
    (Apprentice Firepaw)
    Brightdrop- White she-cat with green eyes
    Snowmist- Silvery gray she-cat with striking blue eyes and snow white paws
    (Apprentice Dawnpaw)
    Duskfire- Dark brown tabby tom with black stripes and and orange eyes
    Birdsong- Small light brown she-cat with dusky green eyes
    Winterglow- Bright, white tom with silvery stripes and yellow eyes
    Nightbird- Black she-cat with white flecks and green eyes

    Queens:
    Ashwhisker- Speckled gray she-cat with black and darker flecks and green eyes mother to Duskfire’s kits:
    (Tigerkit- Speckled black and white tom with brown patches and brown eyes
    Patchkit- Patchy brown tom with green eyes
    Badgerkit- Black, white and gray striped tom with green eyes)
    Frostbird- Small white she-cat with silver flecks and ice blue eyes heavily pregnant with Stormstar’s kits
    Leafstorm- Cream dappled brown she-cat with green eyes

    Apprentices:
    Riverpaw- Pretty silver tabby she-cat with white muzzle, chest, belly paws and tail tip with violet eyes
    Lionpaw- Handsome dark golden tom with long fur and green eyes
    Pebblepaw- Speckled gray she-cat with blue eyes
    Firepaw- Bright ginger she-cat with white muzzle, chest, belly and paws has fiery green eyes
    Dawnpaw- Cream she-cat with silky fur and pale lilac eyes

    Elders:
    Ashflower- Chalky gray she-cat with black spots and blue eyes
    Blackfrost- Black tom with green eyes

    TO COME: MEADOWCLAN&STREAMCLAN
     
    Last edited: Mar 20, 2017
  3. Feather Hearts

    Feather Hearts Chillin' With My Peeps

    1. Defend your Clan, even with your life. You may have friendships with cats from other Clans, but your loyalty must remain to your Clan, as one day you may meet them in battle.
    2. Do not hunt or trespass on another Clan's territory.
    3. Elders,queens and kits must be fed before apprentices and warriors. Unless they have permission, apprentices may not eat until they have hunted to feed the elders. If any warrior or apprentice is sick or injured, they may eat while the elders, queens, and kits are eating.
    4. Prey is killed only to be eaten. Give thanks to StarClan for its life.
    5. A kit must be at least six moons old to become an apprentice.
    6. Newly appointed warriors will keep a silent vigil for one night after receiving their warrior name.
    7. A cat cannot be made deputy without having mentored at least one apprentice.
    8. The deputy will become Clan leader when the leader dies, retires or is exiled.
    9. After the death or retirement of the deputy, the new deputy must be chosen before moonhigh.
    10. A gathering of all four Clans is held at the full moon during a truce that lasts for the night. There shall be no fighting among Clans at this time.
    11. Borders must be checked and marked daily. Challenge all trespassing cats.
    12. No warrior can neglect a kit in pain or danger, even if the kit is from a different Clan.
    13. The word of the Clan leader is the warrior code.
    14. An honorable warrior does not need to kill other cats to win their battles, unless they are outside the warrior code or if it is necessary for self-defense.
    15. A warrior rejects the soft life of a kittypet.
    16. Each Clan has the right to be proud and independent, but in times of trouble they must forget their boundaries and fight side by side to protect the five. Each Clan must help the others so that no Clan will fall.
    Exceptions

    • Cats on their way to the Starstone or Starpool are allowed to cross other Clans' territories to get to their destination - LightningClan grounds on the hillside and MossClan grounds by the lake, in the forest.
    • At the lake, cats may travel on other Clans' grounds as long as they are within two fox-lengths of the lake; for instance, to go to a Gathering.
    • Cats may travel on other Clan territories if they have something to report or ask for help.
    • The code is flexible about leadership challenges. Cats may challenge a weak or cruel leader if their Clan is in danger, and if their leadership threatens the Clan, the code expects a warrior to challenge their leader.
    Additional Rules

    The following rules are not specifically stated in the warrior code, but are expected to be followed:
    • Medicine cats may not have a mate or kits.
    • Kits must stay in camp until they are apprenticed, and are not allowed to hunt.
    • The safety of the Clan is more important than the safety of one cat.
    • Clans must not unite together to drive out another Clan.
    • Clans must not force another Clan to share territory.
    • Enemy patrols must not attack cats if they are on a mission all four Clans agree on.
    • Cats cannot eat when going to the Starstone or Starpool to speak with StarClan.
    Clans:

    MossClan- MossClan are thick pelted, brave loyal warriors, They stand up for their clans and aren’t afraid to help others.
    Territory: A thick forest with tangled undergrowth, a large stream seperates the border with NightClan and another with LightningClan.
    Camp: A huge oak grows almost in the center of the territory, huge roots grow, around it making a strong wall, all the ground in their camp is covered in thick, fluffy moss. The dens are in the roots, and alot of cats have their own dens.
    Prey:
    Mice- Common
    Vole- Common
    Sparrow- Common
    Blackbird- Uncommon
    Squirrel- Uncommon
    Wood Pigeon- Rare

    LightningClan: LightningClan are the fast, Ferocious warriors of the hill sides. They are easily offended and don’t take no for an answer.
    Territory: A waterfall, sourced by the Starpool itself runs through their territory they live on the open hills, a few trees dot the territory, most of the grass is very long. There is a forest near to the border with MossClan.
    Camp: A large dip in the ground the dens are mostly old rabbit burrows that have been furnished with nests. The leader has a large stone in front of his/her large den.
    Prey:
    Mice- Common
    Vole-Common
    Rabbit- Common
    Patridge- Uncommon
    Hare- Uncommon
    Grouse- Rare
    Pheasant- Very Rare



    StreamClan: StreamClan swim and love the water. They have sleek pelts and are often considered quite lazy. Also: Crayfish migrate to their territory every year.
    Territory: They live on a large island, inaccessible to twolegs and other clans.
    Camp: In a large gorge with a stream running through it a circle of willow trees surrounds the gorge, so cats were able to dig dens among the twisted roots.
    Prey: Their territory is a major salmon spawning ground, crayfish migrate there annualy
    Minnow- Common
    Frog- Common
    Carp- Uncommon
    Crab- Uncommon
    Salmon- Rare
    Rainbow Trout- Very Rare
    Plover- Very Rare
    Lapwing- Very Rare

    NightClan: NightClan are often considered evil, dark-hearted cats that kill for fun. They are secretive and stay to the shadows, usally their pelts are dark tabby, brown, gray and black.
    Territory: A marshy pine forest, you can hardly see the sun under the trees. A small pool is in the middle of the camp.
    Camp: A large gorge, with a bramble screen growing over the top. It is very difficult to access, without getting your pelts pricked. NightClan have secret tunnels that lead into their camp. The dens are all heavily fortified bramble dens. The nursery den is lined with feathers and fur, so the kits don’t prick themselves. The leader’s den is a rocky crevice with brambles growing from the edges. They make annoucements from the shade rock, that juts out from the den.
    Prey:
    Frog-Common
    Mouse- Common
    Lizard- Uncommon
    Grey Squirrel- Uncommon
    Crow- Rare
    Raven-Rare

    MeadowClan: Small mainly golden-brown cats, MeadowClan prefer to avoid conflict. They can fight, but prefer battles via words then any actual conflict.
    Territory: Large meadow of golden grass, they have hardly any trees on the territory.
    Camp: A huge tree with twisted roots, the cats’ dens are among the tree roots
    Prey:Unknown, MeadowClan are very secretive, only known prey: Vole



    Prolouge
    Lightning flickered at the edge of a rocky gorge. Two cats sat above the gorge, rain pounding as the icy wind whipped their fur. The smaller one, a gray she-cat spoke first, yowling to get over the sound of pounding rain. “LeafHeart”, the she-cat meowed, “I need to ask you something.” A caramel- colored she-cat looked up at her. “What would that be?”, she hissed. The gray she-cat’s eyes were glazed with sadness. “I need you to take my kits.


    Chapter 1
    A wiry gray tabby tom stepped forward. “What are you doing on my territory”, he growled.
    “What do you mean, your territory.” A gray tortoiseshell snarled.
    “If you take one step closer I’ll…”
    “Attack!” a light brown tabby tom shrieked.
    “What are you three doing?” A golden tabby meowed, emerging from the nursery den.
    “We were playing”, The gray tabby meowed indignantly.
    The golden she-cat sighed. “You’re apprentice ceremonies are tonight, and you will look like you’ve been dragged through the mud in the lake backwards, what’s FlameStar going to say?” she scolded, her expression lightened. “Go clean yourselves up.”

    “That was your fault GorseKit, If FlameStar delays our apprenticeships again I’m gonna tear my fur out.”
    GorseKit snorted. “It’s not my fault, I wasn’t actually going to attack you, if anything it’s SparrowKit’s fault, he yowled the battle cry.”
    Sparrowkit frowned. “IceKit and GorseKit, it was both of your fault.”
    The two kits flattened their ears, but said nothing.
    Finally IceKit broke the silence, “I’m not licking all this mud off my fur. Let’s go wash in the stream.”
    The other two nodded their approval. As the three kits padded across camp, they heard many gasps from the other cats. They can think what they want, one day I’m gonna be the best warrior in the forest, Gorsekit thought. He scrambled backwards in alarm as Icekit plunged into the stream. “What are you? A StreamClan cat?” he muttered. Reluctantly he waded into the stream, shuddering as the cold water licked at his belly fur. He held his breath and plunged under the icy cold water. Racing back to the surface, he hoisted himself onto the sandy bank, shaking the tiny water droplets from his pelt.

    A cold silver moon hung like a claw in the midnight-blue sky. “I’m so excited.” Icekit squeaked, “Look, Flamestar is padding out of his den to the mossrock.” Gorsekit looked up. “All cats gather below the mossrock for a clan meeting.”Flamestar meowed.
    Leafheart looked at her kits. “You will walk up there like sensible apprentices not silly kits, and you will at least groom yourselves before.” Gorsekit nodded, before racing off. “As you all know we have three kits, they have been in in the nursery den for the required six moons, Gorsekit, Icekit, Sparrowkit step forward.” The three kits stepped forward together. “Icekit, you have been proved, bold and enthusiastic and now from this moment, until you receive your warrior name, you will be called Icepaw your mentor will be Riverfang.” “Icepaw, Icepaw” the crowd of cats called out. “Sparrowpaw, you have requested to me you follow the path of a medicine cat, Mistleaf will be your mentor.“Sparrowpaw! Sparrowpaw!” the crowd cheered. “And now Gorsekit, it is your time to become an apprentice, from now until you become a warrior you will be called Gorsepaw, Sunstream is a brave warrior, also my loyal deputy she will mentor you. StarClan I ask you to look down on these three apprentices, and guide their paws on the path set out for them.”
    “Icepaw, Sparrowpaw, Gorsepaw!” the crowd cheered. Gorsepaw swelled with pride, This is
    what I deserve.


    Chapter 2
    Gorsepaw looked at the cold shafts of moonlight. It had been a day since their apprentice ceremonies. “The gathering is tonight”, Flamestar meowed, “We should take our new apprentices, Bramblepaw, Silverpaw, Icepaw, Gorsepaw and Sparrowpaw. You can come, and your mentors. That should be enough. We’ll leave now.”

    Gorsepaw looked around. “The territory is so big.” he meowed. Sunstream smiled, “You haven’t seen the half of it.” Gorsepaw looked around. “How are we going to get to the island.” “We swim of course.”
    “What?!”
    Sunstream laughed “There’s a tree bridge, don’t worry we won’t make you swim.”
    Gorsepaw let out a sigh of relief. As they came to the long, fallen pines he looked at the cracked dry riverbed placed below him.
    “The bridge looks slippery.” Icepaw meowed.
    “Don’t worry”, Flamestar meowed calmly, “We won’t let you fall.”
    Taking a few steps forward he noticed slippery green lichen clung to the pine trees. “Argh!” Gorsepaw screeched, his hind legs skidding off the tree branch. “Help me!” He dug his claws into the trunk of the tree, thrashing his body helplessly.
    “Gorsepaw!” Icepaw screamed, racing forward, she reached down, gripping her brother’s scruff tightly in her jaws.
    “Hrrld orrn”, she mumbled through a mouthful of fur.
    “I’m trying”, Gorsepaw snapped. Terror seered through him, and he leaped up onto the branch. Trying to shake off the annoyed looks from the other cats he continued the rest of the way to the island.

    Gorsepaw looked at the island, Wow! This is amazing! He looked at the gorge, there was a large rock jutting from the edge. “Go find somewhere to sit.” Sunstream meowed. “Okay!” Gorsepaw bounded down the slope. He looked over his shoulder. Icepaw was chatting with a few LightningClan apprentices and Sparrowpaw was meeting the other clan’s medicine cats. Boring! Gorsepaw thought I might as well find somewhere to sit. Gorsepaw padded towards the spot a pretty she-cat was chatting to a larger tom. “Hi”, she meowed, noticing Gorsepaw. “Oh, hi Gorsepaw meowed. “Who are you?”, she asked. “Oh, I’m Gorsepaw.” he meowed, embarrassed.
    “You made quite the entrance”, she remarked, a sparkle in eye.
    Gorsepaw grinned, “Yeah, I meant to do that.”
    The she-cat laughed, “I’m Riverpaw. In LightningClan.”
    “Oh, cool then”, Gorsepaw meowed.
    “The gathering will begin now!” A loud voice called out from the great rock.
    “You may speak first Miststar.”
    A gray she-cat, her fur speckled white with age, stepped forward.
    “NightClan is strong”, her voice was crackly. “We have three new kits, Larkkit, Tawnykit and Graykit, born to Streamsong, We also have two new warriors Doveheart and Whitemist.”
    “Doveheart! Whitemist!” The other clans called out. Gorsepaw noticed that Streamclan weren’t cheering, their pelts looked ruffled, and their gazes were slits. That’s not nice, He thought, It’s mean for a whole clan to not cheer for new warriors. When the cheering had died down, a Dark gray tabby tom stepped forward. Flamestar dipped his head respectfully, “You may speak now Stormstar.”
    Stormstar dipped his large gray head, his white ears pricked.
    “LightningClan are strong, despite the beggining drought, the prey is good as ever, we have no new kits but, there are three new warriors, Pheasantflight, Quailwing and Coalclaw.”
    Again cheering from all the clans broke out, StreamClan bristled, but cheered lightly.
    A dark brown she-cat stepped forward. “My clan is doing well”, she meowed, “A patrol recently drove out a fox, that had made a den on our territory, It went towards MossClan territory. I doubt it will give you any trouble though.”
    “Thank you Briarstar, Pearlstar, you may speak now.” Flamestar meowed.
    A cream and gray she-cat padded out of the shadows.
    “That must be Pearlstar”, Riverpaw whispered. “Gorsepaw, meet me tomorrow night.”
    Gorsepaw nodded, looking at the she-cat’s piercing blue gaze. Her cream tabby pelt bristled, every bone visible under her fur.
    “The lake is drying!” she spat, “And thanks to you my clan are starving!” Her pelt bristled, the fur on her neck rising. “The lake belongs to StreamClan, we are claiming it as our territory.”
    “What?! You can’t do that!”, Stormstar spat, “The lake belongs to no cat!”
    “We all need the lake now that the streams have dried!” Briarstar growled, “You can’t claim it!”
    “Yes we can.” Pearlstar hissed. “Streamclan can only eat fish, so clearly, we should have the lake.”
    “Can’t you find something else to eat?!” A NightClan elder yowled.
    “Yeah, or are you too dumb too catch mice?” A MeadowClan apprentice called.
    Pearlstar’s fur fluffed, her eyes slitted,”Fine!” She growled, “We won’t claim the lake, but the fish belong to us!”










    Chapter 3
    “What are we doing today?” Icepaw asked, bouncing out of the apprentice den towards her mentor.
    “Nothing fun I’m afraid”, Riverfang meowed.
    “What?” Icepaw asked, still curious.
    “Water patrols”, Riverfang sighed.
    “Cool!” Icepaw exclaimed, “Can Crimsonpaw come too?”
    “Sure.” Riverfang meowed cooly.
    “Crimsonpaw! You can come on water patrol!”
    Crimsonpaw looked up, “Great! I’ll go get Blazingheart.”
    “Blazingheart”, Riverfang mused.
    “What was that Riverfang?” Blazingheart meowed, padding up to the silver tabby.
    “Oh, nothing. Do you have the moss?” She asked, obviously changing the subject.
    “Yerp.” Crimsonpaw mumbled through a mouthful of moss.
    “Great!” Blazingheart meowed, let’s go.”

    The sun blazed overhead, it’s scorching rays burned the ground.
    “It’s so hot.” Crimsonpaw groaned.
    “I can see that”, Riverfang grunted, “We’re almost at the lake.”
    Or what’s left of it, Icepaw thought darkly. Suddenly the reek of dead fish filled her nostrils. “Eww, yuck!” Icepaw spat. Looking at the lake bed, she saw hundreds of rotting fish scattered across the pebbles. “Yuck.” She remarked. As she leapt down the bank, realisation shot through her this used to be underwater! Sharp pebbles sprayed out behind her, as she skidded down the slope.
    “Watch what you’re doing!” Crimsonpaw yowled, “I’ve got grit in my eyes now!”
    “Sorry”, Icepaw mumbled, glancing towards where her friend was trying to remove the dirt from her eyes.
    “Follow me”, Blazingheart meowed, “Be careful, the mud can fall in.”
    Icepaw cautiously followed Blazingheart’s steps, carefully tracing them through the mud. Eww, this gonna take moons to wash off!

    The dirty shallow pool in the center of the lake, could barely be called a lakebed anymore. The reek of rotten fish was practically overpowering now, and the large corpses made her shudder. This is disgusting. She thought. The fish disturbed her with their large glazed eyes, so she tried not to look at them.
    “What do we do now?” Icepaw asked Riverfang, the tabby was tracing Blazingheart’s pawsteps as well.
    “Get some moss, and soak it in the lake. When you think it’s wet, get it out and do another piece.” Riverfang instructed. Icepaw padded up to where Crimsonpaw was holding the moss, she took some and gently dabbed it in the gritty, yet clear water. The clans can’t go on like this.


    TO BE EDITED!!!!





    Chapter 4
    “The camp is under attack!!!” Riverfang screamed racing into camp, “StreamClan and NightClan are coming they don’t look happy!”
    “Defend the camp!” Flamestar ordered, “Don’t let them get to the queens or the elders!”
    The other clan’s scent’s overwhelmed Gorsepaw. He raced out of camp with the warriors. “Attack!!!”
    In a split second the world turned red around him, just two sunrises ago, he had been play-fighting with his littermates, now this was a real battle. He unsheathed his claws, tearing at the flesh of a NightClan cat, beads of blood splattered his pelt, and for a second he didn’t know if it was his or an enemies.
    “Heellp!!”, A piercing voice snapped him out of his daze.
    “I’m coming!”, he called, but his senses were forcing him to kill. He unsheathed his claws before slicing open the throat of a large tom ,blood splattered his face. Gorsepaw looked at the mangled body in horror. What have I done? The tom’s clanmates helped him up, before retreating into the woods. Foreboding claws gripped at Gorsepaw’s throat. Despite his clanmates helping him, he won’t survive. He thought darkly. His vision was blurred as he clawed his way through the fighting cats.
    “They’re in the camp!”, the terrified voice of Snowtail called.
    “Warriors of NightClan, fall back”, a powerful voice commanded.
    “Into camp now!” Sunstream snarled, she had more ferocity in her voice than ever before.
    “But, I wanna fight!”, Gorsepaw argued.
    “Get into camp.” Sunstream meowed firmly, “You’re only an apprentice, this is your first battle.”
    “But I can do it!” He protested, biting back the words ,I killed a tom.
    “Get into camp! I don’t have time for this!” She growled.
    Gorsepaw padded into camp. I don’t feel hurt, I feel more alive than ever.
    “Icepaw, Gorsepaw and Bramblepaw” Flamestar meowed, “Go to LightningClan and get help.”
    “But, can Crimsonpaw come?”, Bramblepaw whined, his clear liking for the pretty she-cat now in the open.
    “No!” Flamestar meowed, “This is a life or death situation, do you want your clanmates to die?”
    “Of course not!”, Bramblepaw hissed, “That’s the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard.”
    “Then go! I’m not gonna tolerate any more of this.”
    “Fine.” Bramblepaw growled.

    As the three cats raced into the forest, fear pricked Gorsepaw What if Riverpaw has to fight.
    “Hurry up!”, Icepaw hissed, snapping him out of his thoughts. As they approached the LightningClan camp he halted. Sniffing the air for Riverpaw’s sweet scent, he found only the sharp, wiry scent of LightningClan.
    “Come on Gorsepaw!”, Icepaw growled, “The more you daydream, the more our clanmates are injured.”
    “Okay, I’m coming!”, Gorsepaw mewed, as they padded down the slope into the LightningClan camp. “

    “Intruders!”, A gray she-cat spat.
    “They don’t look like intruders”, a brown tabby mewed.
    “They’re only three apprentices!”, said a small white queen, her belly heavy with kits.
    “What is all this commotion?”, the powerful figure of Stormstar meowed, emerging from his den.
    “These apprentices are in the camp.” The white queen mewed.
    Stormstar licked the she-cat affectionately.
    “Thank you for clearing that up Frostbird.” Stormstar meowed, standing protectively over his mate.
    “I heard Stormstar’s first mate Streamflow died of greencough.” Bramblepaw whispered.
    That must have been Riverpaw’s mother! The thought sparked in Gorsepaw’s mind, like lightning.
    If Stormstar heard Bramblepaw’s comment, he did a good job of hiding any offense taken. Gorsepaw scanned the camp for any sign of Riverpaw. Spotting her pretty silver pelt he turned his attention to Stormstar.
    “Stormstar”, Icepaw puffed, still regaining her breath, “We need some warriors, NightClan and StreamClan are attacking the camp!”, she gasped.
    Stormstar tensed, “Very well”, he meowed, “Sweetflower, Brightdrop, Dewwhisker! Come in my patrol, Brightfire, take Tanglefur, Pearlfur, Snowmist, Winterglow and Nightbird.”
    The air in the LigntningClan’s camp was thick with tension as the warriors departed. “Where are they going?”, a little black and white tom asked.
    “Come back here Badgerkit.” A speckled gray she-cat meowed, emerging from what must have been the nursery den.
    “Let’s go”, Icepaw whispered, nudging Gorsepaw towards the camp entrance.
    Gorsepaw followed, aware of the staring eyes
     
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    HeavensHens88 Overrun With Chickens

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    MAGNIFICENT JOB!!!!!!!
    Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, Feather!!
    THE NEXT TIME YOU ARE ONLINE, please have Bracken say something to Reed/Mink that exposes him, even if we aren't online just so that we can get his banishment moving along.....
     
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  5. Is Bluestar a good leader? Absolutly.Until she became confused and angered by Tigerclaw's banishment.
    Is Tigerclaw a great example of a villian? He was, But in my opinion, Scourge was wayyyyyy better
    Do you prefer Leafpool or Squirrelflight? Honestilly I love both.But I find Squrrielflight wayyyyy more enjoyable.She needs her own Novel/Super Edition(Duh she is Firestar's daughter!)


    Here's One Quiz!

    Witch cats were apart of the prophecy,"There will be three kin of our kin who hold the power of the stars within there paws"?
    Who was ther very first leader of eatch Clan?

    Another thingy:
    Why do you think Snowfur died?Just because the Erin's wanted Whitekit to be miserable all his life?Or were they afraid of having Thistleclaw turn on her?
    Witch do you prefer?Firestar or Bluestar?
    Hiw many series have you read?(I've read almost all the way up to the Omen Of The Star's!Almost done with Sunrise!)
     
  6. Feather Hearts

    Feather Hearts Chillin' With My Peeps

    Witch cats were apart of the prophecy,"There will be three kin of our kin who hold the power of the stars within there paws"?Lionblaze, Hollyleaf and Jayfeather, but honestly I probably prefer hollyleaf.
    Who was the very first leader of each Clan?River Ripple, Wind Runner, Clear Sky, Thunder, and Tall Shadow

    Another thingy:
    Why do you think Snowfur died?Just because the Erin's wanted Whitekit to be miserable all his life?Or were they afraid of having Thistleclaw turn on her? Well, I think if Snowfur lived,Thistleclaw would have turned on her anyway, so yeah probably option two
    Witch do you prefer?Firestar or Bluestar? Firestar! Bluestar kinda went crazy in A Dangerous Path,I wasreading it again yesterday, and it really annoyed me.
    How many series have you read?(I've read almost all the way up to the Omen Of The Star's!Almost done with Sunrise!)
    1
    Not Two I don't think. Hmm
    3
    and 4
    I've also read the vision of shadows so far
     
  7. HeavensHens88

    HeavensHens88 Overrun With Chickens

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    FEATHER!!!!!!! :eek: HOW LONG ARE YOU GOING TO BE ON RIGHT NOW?!?!
     
  8. Feather Hearts

    Feather Hearts Chillin' With My Peeps

    I'm not sure. Mom's at a course thing, so maybe an hour?I've been really ill all weekend, but I'm just loading my HAM page now.
     
  9. HeavensHens88

    HeavensHens88 Overrun With Chickens

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    Lost, I fear.
    :yesss:
    Sorry to hear you've been sick, but :woot to you being on!!!!! :weee
     
  10. Feather Hearts

    Feather Hearts Chillin' With My Peeps

    lol
     

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