Stormy's Trip (sequel to Gingernut & the Great Chick Trio)

Discussion in 'Pictures & Stories of My Chickens' started by OwlLover, Oct 4, 2011.

  1. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Okay everyone! Now that Gingernut and the Great Chick Trio: The Searches is finished, it is now time for me to write the sequel: Stormy's Fight!
    Whenever you see this little guy, [​IMG] there is a new chapter.

    Stormy walked silently along the countryside. The soft breeze swished against her face as she dust bathed in the warm dirt. It was her first summer; what seemed as if it would be her favorite season.
    But later that day, she was proved wrong.
     
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  2. Magic Birdie

    Magic Birdie Overrun With Chickens

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    Now that I've failed on following your other one, I can follow this one! [​IMG]


    By the way, this story sounds a lot like a book I know. Is it based on that?
     
  3. Magic Birdie

    Magic Birdie Overrun With Chickens

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    Quote:Actually, it sounds EXACTLY like the book. It is based on it!
     
  4. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Quote:Actually, it sounds EXACTLY like the book. It is based on it!

    I know which book your talking about. [​IMG] But trust me, it changes fast. Ace remains throughout the story, and Stormy does fight him, but just keep reading. [​IMG]
     
  5. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Actually, I think I'm going to take that out and replace it with something else. Now that I've read it over again, its far too similar...
    I was going to base it off of Flower (or whatever its called) but I just checked the book and its too close.
     
  6. lvchicken

    lvchicken Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Quote:Actually, it sounds EXACTLY like the book. It is based on it!

    I know which book your talking about. [​IMG] But trust me, it changes fast. Ace remains throughout the story, and Stormy does fight him, but just keep reading. [​IMG]

    What book?? [​IMG]
     
  7. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Quote:I know which book your talking about. [​IMG] But trust me, it changes fast. Ace remains throughout the story, and Stormy does fight him, but just keep reading. [​IMG]

    What book?? [​IMG]

    I can't remember its name, but I think its Flower or something...
    anyways, I got the preview up. [​IMG]
     
  8. lvchicken

    lvchicken Chillin' With My Peeps

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    RingedTeal Chillin' With My Peeps

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  10. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Chapter 1

    It was warm, the sun shined, and a gentle breeze stroked the silky grass on the countryside. Stormy was living this moment up with her best friend, a cat named Jet. This was her favorite time of the year. Of course, this was her first year that she was alive.
    "Jet," Stormy asked, "what do you say we explore a little bit?"
    "Uh...." Jet replied, "don't you think we should ask our parents for permission first?"
    "Come on! We're 4 months old," Stormy protested. "We can take care of ourselves!"
    "Stormy," Jet argued, "I'm getting permission first."
    Stormy sighed in exasperation. "Alright, wuss."

    "No, you two aren't going," Fenix and Rocket scolded.
    "Okay, knock it off you two," Jazzy scolded. "Come on, let them explore the world a little! If you two are so worried, why not go with them?"
    "I love your thinking!" Nikki agreed.
    "Okay, sounds like a plan to me," Fenix agreed. "Jazzy and I are going with Stormy. Nikki and Rocket, you're coming with Jet."
    "YAY!!!!!" Jet and Stormy screamed at the same time.

    "Wow, this place looks pretty," Jet commented as they walked past a lake.
    "There's some tasty salmon in there too," Rocket said, hinting Nikki that he was hungry.
    "Oh, alright," Nikki said. "Come on girls, we're going to have lunch."

    Stormy and Jet ate their fish, and set off down through the countryside, completely forgetting about their parents.

    "Stormy! Stormy?" Jazzy called out as she began to get scared.
    "Jet! Jet where are you," Nikki called out with worry.
    "This is bad," Fenix commented as she searched around some rocks.
    "Can you smell them," Jazzy asked Rocket.
    "I'm trying, but I'm not picking up any scent!" Rocket replied.
    As worry began to set in, so did the sun. The parents realized that they wouldn't be able to find Stormy and Jet before it was dark, so they roosted up in a nearby tree, hoping to find the morning just around the corner...

    Jet and Stormy, however, completely disregarded the darkness and allowed the moonlight to lead them. Just at that moment, Jet remembered...
    "Uh, Stormy," Jet said with worry, "where are our parents..?"
    Stormy looked around, but saw nothing but a plain of grass.
    "Hey, what was that?!"

    To be continued
     

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