I am writing A story about an Old hen who discovers that there is such a thing as a good life, after being a battery cage hen for years. Please feel free to tell me what you think or what I should change! Wanna become a official BYC fan? Let me know and I will add you harli50 (first ever fan!) singingchickenmomma (2nd) Chapter 1 not an egg-citing experience Ugh, it seems this tiny little space just keeps getting smaller and smaller! I thought to myself, as my brother, who was in the same tiny dark place as me accidentally kicked me. Oops! Sorry sis, it just keeps getting harder and harder to move in here! he sensitively tweeted. I softly said its fine as I tried to find ways to get out of this dark, stiff place! I got it! I excitedly tweeted. Got what? my brother replied. I know how to get out of here! I quickly said. Whoa, slow down! my brother said. I think we can get out of here! How? my brother wondered. Well are beaks are sharp, maybe we can peck are way out! Well lets find out! my brother said as he started to peck the hard brown shell. We both pecked for several hours, before I finally got out. Brother Im free! I quickly said as I fell on the warm ground. My brother still was not out of that weird brown thing yet though. I looked around the huge room and I discovered that we were not the only chicks here; there were a ton of other chicks! There were also big red lights! Sister, Im out! My brother happily said. Yay!