~Story~ A New Home- a hen discovers A good life (Chapter 11 FINALLY!!)

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  1. chickenlover91

    chickenlover91 Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I am writing A story about an Old hen who discovers that there is such a thing as a good life, after being a battery cage hen for years. Please feel free to tell me what you think or what I should change!


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    Chapter 1
    not an egg-citing experience


    “Ugh, it seems this tiny little space just keeps getting smaller and smaller!” I thought to myself, as my brother, who was in the same tiny dark place as me accidentally kicked me. “Oops! Sorry sis, it just keeps getting harder and harder to move in here!” he sensitively tweeted. I softly said “its fine” as I tried to find ways to get out of this dark, stiff place!
    “I got it!” I excitedly tweeted. “Got what?” my brother replied.
    “I know how to get out of here!” I quickly said. “Whoa, slow down!” my brother said. “I think we can get out of here!” “How?” my brother wondered. “Well are beaks are sharp, maybe we can peck are way out!” “Well let’s find out!” my brother said as he started to peck the hard brown shell. We both pecked for several hours, before I finally got out. “Brother I’m free!” I quickly said as I fell on the warm ground. My brother still was not out of that weird brown thing yet though. I looked around the huge room and I discovered that we were not the only chicks here; there were a ton of other chicks!
    There were also big red lights! “Sister, I’m out! My brother happily said. “Yay!”
     
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  2. Chicken Frenzie

    Chicken Frenzie Chicken Whisperer

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    Cant wait to see more.!
     
  3. chickenlover91

    chickenlover91 Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I will do another chapter soon [​IMG]
     
  4. chickenlover91

    chickenlover91 Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Does anyone else like it?
     
  5. HollyBird24

    HollyBird24 Overrun With Chickens

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    Theres only one chick in an egg, unless its a double yolker and they don't hatch [​IMG]
     
  6. chickenlover91

    chickenlover91 Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Its was a double yolker, and double yolkers can hatch!
     
  7. NovaAman

    NovaAman Overrun With Chickens

    omg, I saw a lady with a double yolker and it hatched and both survived and were normal!
     
  8. chickenlover91

    chickenlover91 Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Who wants more?
     
  9. LoveNewChicks

    LoveNewChicks Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I don't know,
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    Me! [​IMG]
     
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  10. chickenlover91

    chickenlover91 Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Chapter 2
    A new friend

    My brother and I were cold, and wet so we tried to stand up and go over to the nearest red lamp for some warmth, but just as I started standing I fell right back on the ground! “Ouch!” My brother quickly asked me “are you ok?” “I am fine; it feels as if my legs are jello!” I said. “Maybe we should wait until we are dry.” My brother said as we shivered in the cold. After about an hour of suffering in the cold we could finally stand! “Look I’m walking brother!” “Let me try!” my brother said in excitement!
    We felt so big and strong when we got up on are feet and walked over to the warmth of the red light! “Ah, I have never felt better in my life!” I said in pure thrill. There were so many other chicks that I could not count! I then saw something frightening and sad! “Brother do you see what I see!” I said in fear of getting the answer that I did not want to hear. “Oh my!” My brother answered. “Please tell me they are just sleeping” I said in my mind. And then a bigger chick than us said “Hello! My name is Jackie, what is yours?” “Um, um…”I quietly said in embarrassment “You don’t have a name do you?” “Um… no.” I answered. “Oh silly you! You give yourself a name!” Jackie said while giggling. I thought for a second and then I said “What about Henny!”
     
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