Story Title?

Discussion in 'Games, Jokes, and Fun!' started by NixNoodleNumbat, Jan 20, 2012.

  1. NixNoodleNumbat

    NixNoodleNumbat Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 1, 2011
    Australia
    Okay, I've written a short story and I need a title. Any ideas?
    Basic info:
    POV character is Nele, a talking mouse
    Set in the Victorian era, England
    The 5 orphans are Victoria, Noelle, Rosaline, Foalan and Bodevere. Everyone except Bodevere is 17-ish(Bo is 4-ish)
    Victoria is an albino shapeshifter
    Storyline:
    Nele meets Victoria at orphanage
    Victoria takes Nele back to her house with 4 other orphans
    Vic. dissapears
    Nele goes with Foalan to assassinate(for money)
    Victoria comes back, she has betrayed them
    Cops come to take children to workhouse
    Foalan, Rosaline and Nele get away

    So that's the basic storyline. Any help would be appreciated.
     
  2. NixNoodleNumbat

    NixNoodleNumbat Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 1, 2011
    Australia
    Anyone?
     
  3. NixNoodleNumbat

    NixNoodleNumbat Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 1, 2011
    Australia
    Please?
     
  4. TechnoCat

    TechnoCat Overrun With Chickens

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    Wherever Angel is~
    Shadow Tears?
     
  5. NixNoodleNumbat

    NixNoodleNumbat Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 1, 2011
    Australia
    That's a good one...
     
  6. TechnoCat

    TechnoCat Overrun With Chickens

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    Wherever Angel is~
    Or:
    The Deafening Silence
    Silver Lights
    The Red Glass
    Sound of the Siren

    Like it?
     
  7. TechnoCat

    TechnoCat Overrun With Chickens

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    Wherever Angel is~
    I just had another brainwave:
    Maybe:
    Cry of the Angels
     
  8. NixNoodleNumbat

    NixNoodleNumbat Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 1, 2011
    Australia
    Thanks so much, momma! I especially like 'the deafening silence'.
    Anyone else?
     
  9. TechnoCat

    TechnoCat Overrun With Chickens

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    Wherever Angel is~
    I do too! You're always welcome.
    I like 'Cry of the Angels' Iono why...
     
  10. ChickenPeep

    ChickenPeep Faith & Feathers

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    Um...... Thinking.........
     

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