"The day my world turned upside down" story

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  1. AnimalsComeFirst

    AnimalsComeFirst Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Fan club is on page 27 - just say "I wanna join the fan club" and i'll sign you up!
    Book 2, "Taken away from the one thing I love", begins on page 34.


    This is MY story and you may not copy it and show it as your own. It is written by AnimalsComeFirst.


    I wagged my tail and jumped around the car, barking as I went. My owner chuckled and said “Easy boy, we’re going to the bank first, then off to the petshop!”
    I hopped up in the car and jumped to the front seat, ready to see all the trees fly by and stick my nose out the window and smell all the coyotes, deer, and whatever else lived in the forest.
    My master and I lived by ourselves in the woods, away from all other dogs and cars and people. The only time I saw other dogs were when we went to town, a long drive away, but well worth it. I don’t get one thing about humans though, when us dogs play a game called “Bark like there’s no tomorrow”, the humans yank us back and yell and pull us away. If only we could yank them away from that stupid box in the living room that makes so much noise and see how they like it!
    Anyways, the country life was great. No boundaries, miles of open space, adventure at every corner…. Nothing was better! In less than a wag of my tail, my life turned upside down.

    “Stay here boy! I’ll be right back!” my master said as he shut the car door with the windows down far enough for air to come through, then walked into the building. I sniffed the air happily, but then, something smelled wrong. I froze in mid wag. The bushes to my left parted, and out came 2 men wearing black on their faces. “C’mon Jimmy! We got to get in there before the armored truck comes and takes the money from that fundraiser halfway across the state!” One growled. The other didn’t say anything, only nodded his head. They walked slowly up to the sliding door…. Suddenly I realized what was in their hand… they slipped inside unnoticed.
    “BANG!”


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    “Put your hands in the air, or I’ll shoot!” I heard the same gruff voice yell.
    I had to save my master! I jumped around the car barking my head off, kinda like the game “Bark like there’s no tomorrow”, only this was serious! There was no way out unless someone opened the door. “BANG!” My master! That noise only meant one thing, a gun! I saw my master shoot a deer with one once… I was so scared, I was weary of my master for days! I got over it because I knew he wouldn’t hurt me, but those things are deadly! I looked through the doorway of the bank and saw one of the men holding my master by his shirt and yelling “GIVE ME YOUR CAR KEYS, NOW!” My owner refused. The gun was raised…. “BANG!”
    The 2 men emerged from the building, carrying 2 bags, holding my masters car keys. I looked through the door one more time… only to see my master laying on the floor.

    I whimpered and collapsed on the back seat in grieve. The 2 men climbed into the front seats, without noticing me and drove away. “Great Jimmy, you are now a thieve AND a murder! How many laws are you gonna break?” Jimmy still remained silent. Suddenly a anger came over me…. THEY killed MY owner! My master! My friend! Ferociously, I growled and jumped to the front seats and bit the man right in his nose! I started attacking Jimmy while the driver yelled and punched my back. He pulled the car over, got out his gun and….. “BANG!”


    Anyone want more? (Don't worry, it gets happier!)
     
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    AnimalsComeFirst Chillin' With My Peeps

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    “OW!!!!!!!!!!!! MARK!!!!!!!!! YOU SHOT ME YOU #$^%*!!!!” Jimmy yelled in pain. I took my chance when Jimmy opened his door, I jumped out and high tailed it through the forest. I came into a construction site on the edge of the forest and heard “RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRUUUUURRRR”. A huge machine wheeled around scooping up the dirt, and I was next! I yelped and ran blindly through the forest, jumping barbed wire, spooking squirrels and startling birds. “SNAP!” Suddenly pain shot through my leg. I looked down, and saw my foot caught in a steel trap. I yanked and pulled and whined and howled with pain.
    I heard something coming through the underbrush, I lied down to the ground and stayed quiet.... “Well, howdy do!” something clucked. “YIPE!” I jumped up in the air and pulled at my leg with such force that I blacked out.

    Sorry for the short chapter, I'll write more in a sec.
     
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    My eyes fluttered. I heard noises... weird noises. Clucks and squawks and chirps. I opened my eyes fully. My leg was bandaged, I was on a bed of straw. Suddenly my bed was crowded with little fluffy white, black and red heads. "Are you a chick?" one chirped... "Of course he's not, you doo doo brain." one grumbled. "Why are you sleeping" "Wanna play" "Want me to find you a bug?" "Are you cold?" "Want me to preen your..... uh, feathers?" I was pounded with questions, my head was spinning... so I did one thing dogs do when they are upset. I barked and barked and barked my loudest barks. I howled and howled until they all shut their beaks and stood and watched. I stopped to take a breath and saw a bunch of curious and cute faces peering into my face. "Why..." one started to ask. I barked right in his face to stop him, he jumped away and did a alarmed chirp. ALL the mother hens came running, squawking and bawking at me. "HE"S HURTING THE BABYS!!!" "STOP HIM!" They all squawked and screeched. My ears flattened from all the noise, so I jumped up, pushed through all the feathery bodys and ran through the woods in a panic.... again. Only this time I watched where I was stepping.

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