Trails of Emira!

Discussion in 'Games, Jokes, and Fun!' started by Symphony, Sep 16, 2011.

  1. Symphony

    Symphony Vanilla, Little Airt Airt

    Hello! This is another story! Sorry if I'm copying anyone, just tell me if I am. The auther of this story is:

    Symphony and Amigo!

    I'll write the first chapter, my brother the next, and we'll keep taking turns. So beware that the writing style will change a little every other chapter. Also, this will be faster than my story, because two authers, prevents writers block! [​IMG]

    We'll be writing soon!
     
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  2. Amigo

    Amigo Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 13, 2011
    Your house!
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    *Toned down the smilies*
     
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  3. Ooh, sounds cool! [​IMG]
     
  4. luvinmychickens

    luvinmychickens Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jun 15, 2011
    Ohio
    Sounds fun. [​IMG]
     
  5. Symphony

    Symphony Vanilla, Little Airt Airt

    Chapter 1, still more of chapter 1 to come

    Pounding hooves, slashing swords, shields hitting each other. I wasn’t worried about dying, I’ll do anything for him. I was worried about my good master dying. Everyone in our army was falling left and right. We were losing the battle. As I galloped through the enemy’s horses, I didn’t care if a spear pierced me or a blade sliced me. All I wanted was to win the battle, go home with my friends and master.

    When we fought off the line of enemies, I was so glad my master survived, and my friends and their master’s did also. But something happened that none of us suspected, something that will make wives widows, children orphans, and horses homeless.

    The enemy came from everywhere! From each side, back and front. I watched as my friends and their masters died. I was obeying my master, every turn he asked to do I did, every jump and duck I did. My master was fighting for Constantinople, while I was fighting for my master. Trying to keep the Arab forces from attacking Constantinople was a difficult thing to do. The battle was raging on. Each step and jump was painful because I was battling for so long.

    As I watched my best friend Fiona, fight, I saw.....


    Like it???
     
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  6. Reminds me of an already-published book.
     
  7. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Hey! Don't spoil what looks like a great story!
     
  8. Quote:Seriously. There is a book called 'War Horse' that is about a horse in the middle of war.
     
  9. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Quote:Seriously. There is a book called 'War Horse' that is about a horse in the middle of war.

    This is just the intro now..!
     
  10. OwlLover

    OwlLover Alaskan Wanderer

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    Quote:Seriously. There is a book called 'War Horse' that is about a horse in the middle of war.

    This is just the intro now..!

    I read that too by the way.
     

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