Writing a story in a chicken's eyes! UPDATE Pg. 75!

Discussion in 'Games, Jokes, and Fun!' started by ChickLover98, Jul 28, 2011.

  1. ChickLover98

    ChickLover98 The Chicken Princess

    Apr 24, 2010
    Pennsylvania
    Hi! I am writing a story in a hen's eyes, about her life as a chicken. I am only done with chapter one so far, but I will post chapters as I finish them. It will get more interesting as I continue, I promise. Please comment and give me tips and pointers. [​IMG]

    **DISCLAIMER**
    This is an origional story following a hen from birth, in her words. This story is MY origional work and should not be copied!!! The idea was mine solely and I've worked so hard on this. I plan to have it published and copyrighted, so PLEASE DO NOT COPY! If you plan to read this and then copy it, DO NOT READ IT!!!


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    In Cloudy's Eyes
    A Peek Into a Chicken's Mind

    CHAPTER ONE REVISION:
    https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?pid=7886352#p7886352

    CHAPTER TWO REVISION:
    https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?pid=7886402#p7886402
     
    Last edited: Nov 20, 2011
  2. Frost Homestead

    Frost Homestead eggmonger

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    [​IMG] haha I can just imagine those thoughts going through a little chickies mind too. I know I would be ready to get out of that shell! more please! [​IMG]
     
  3. ChickLover98

    ChickLover98 The Chicken Princess

    Apr 24, 2010
    Pennsylvania
    Quote:OK, thanks for looking! [​IMG] I will write more soon!
     
  4. luvinmychickens

    luvinmychickens Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jun 15, 2011
    Ohio
    That is very good so far!!! It wasn't boring at all. More more more please!
     
  5. ChickLover98

    ChickLover98 The Chicken Princess

    Apr 24, 2010
    Pennsylvania
    Quote:Thanks, so much! I'm working on more now. [​IMG]
     
  6. Theeggboxtoo

    Theeggboxtoo Chillin' With My Peeps

    Oct 5, 2010
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  7. ChickLover98

    ChickLover98 The Chicken Princess

    Apr 24, 2010
    Pennsylvania
    Last edited: Nov 20, 2011
  8. Theeggboxtoo

    Theeggboxtoo Chillin' With My Peeps

    Oct 5, 2010
    Alabama
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  9. BovieVei

    BovieVei Chillin' With My Peeps

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    This is so awesome! A lot different from your everyday literature, huh?

    Keep writing [​IMG]
     
  10. Magic Birdie

    Magic Birdie Overrun With Chickens

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    [​IMG] this is great!
     

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