Your poems or writings to make you think

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  1. Uncle Butch

    Uncle Butch Out Of The Brooder

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    Oct 25, 2008
    Cleveland, Ohio
    I am a newbie But I find myself spending way to much time here
    So I think I would like to read some original writings Like poems or thoughts or just what you were thinking about at a certain time (no big Deal) I just like to read True Thoughts.
    Write what you really think (politic free please) have fun and just write. and of course I will add some.
     
  2. cjeanean

    cjeanean Can't Decide

    Mar 5, 2008
    Missouri
    I don't know...most of my poetry was before I got saved, and it's really dark and depressing...if I ever write any more I'll post it, though!!! [​IMG]
     
  3. Chicabee19

    Chicabee19 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 8, 2008
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    lovely idea! [​IMG]

    I have been writing something .... when it's finished I'll post.
     
  4. maplesky7

    maplesky7 Flock Mistress

    Jun 14, 2008
    N. IL.
    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    bluey is on a cruise
    boo hoo hoo.



    There once was a chicken named Peepers.
    He'd look in a crack at a quarter to eight
    to see which hen he wanted to date
    but all he did was give the poor ladies the creepers.




    me,
    g
     
  5. spook

    spook Chillin' With My Peeps

    Linda


    With those we meet friendships grow
    the light shines down around us all

    One thought to keep,
    is that our loved ones visit us here
    Flooding love and blessings that keep us clear

    Parts of our lives may leave us numbed,
    Memories feel sun kissed and warmed
    And yet today seems cold
    and wandering
    tomorrow may echo the loss that’s sits upon your soul .

    Just remember your friends are alongside you
    in the threshold of life, encouraging and hopeful,
    SO…
    Don’t shut that door!
    Life is to live and your friends are near
    This is your chance
    Shine !
    And make things clear that you can go on,
    creating your choices,

    And those feelings of the walls closing in on you
    When you feel as though you can’t continue

    Call on your pals up here in Maine
    We will remind you of laughter and fun,
    The ghost hunts and knocking trees
    Linda A. flailing along, sitting down and sharing recipes
    Please keep our numbers close to your phone
    no matter how far, you are NEVER alone!



    ~Kellie 10/27/08
    I wrote this for a older friend of mine that has just lost her husband to cancer, sold their house that same month(!) and just left for Florida for the winter.
    The ghost hunts are more about this group of ladies laughing and teasing each other, and the funniest thing this summer was when Linda A.'s camp seat made a noise, she was looking for where the sound came from and it gave way, dropped her fanny on the ground, rolled backwards. After we all was up, grabbing for her, unharmed her pocket began playing this chimming as her phone rang and her son wanted a recipe. We just couldn't help but laugh. Women in a group means good times. Hope you enjoyed the poem. Thanks.
     
  6. Uncle Butch

    Uncle Butch Out Of The Brooder

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    Oct 25, 2008
    Cleveland, Ohio
    When I think about those things
    That stands out most in my mind about you

    If I sat and wrote about all the things that you do that make me happy I would never be able to stop writing again when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think about how I first feel in love with you and made a joke about shaking hands I think about how I fed you cake and kept the fork I think about the first time we kissed and the smell of your hair when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think how you worked with me side by side and how we spent more money than we made and how tough it was when we were starting out eating rice and tomato soup day in and day out when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think about the glow your face shown when you were carrying our first child
    How you looked when giving birth to him how happy you made me. Making me a father for the first time and then when we found out you were going to have a second child I was twice as happy when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think about how hard you worked and cared for your family and helped our family grow and grow when you were carrying our third and our fourth child you didn’t lay back you worked even harder when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think how when I had the stroke and you went to work everyday from early till late and come home black with dirt while I did very little there are NO WORDS to describe how I felt then or how I feel now and when our first born got sick how you worried but still worked and kept our family going and did those things I was not strong enough to do you were there struggling through that and carrying our fifth child when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think how you were in one part of the hospital giving birth while our son was dying in another part of the same hospital but you were strong as they come you gave birth to another beautiful girl and still had time for me when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think about when our son died and how I would have fallen and not gotten up if you were not there to hold me and the family together when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I also think about now how every day you work so hard to hold our family together and keep us going I think about how without you I would not even exist and our family would be in ruins I think about how much I love you everyday and how that love grows everyday how there is nothing I could do to ever show you how I feel about you or what you do nor could I say anything like I love you or thank you or you’re the best because those are just words there are no words I could write and none I could say to even come close to express how I feel about you I just want you to know when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think there is no one else in the whole creation like you or any other I would want but you when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you I think how fortunate I am to even know you and to have the opportunity to love you when I think about those things that stand out most in my mind about you.
    I Love You Even More (if that is even possible)
     
  7. Zahboo

    Zahboo Simply Stated

    Feb 3, 2009
    Hope Mills, NC

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