If you want my opinion, here it is,
It's alright, but it is really similar to SilkiesForEver's story, "On Green Grassy Hills". Your story also needs to be proof-read, and needs LOTS of correction in punctuation. Maybe change the plot line, fix your grammar, and your story could be very nice!
May I join?
Name: Dakoda
Gender: Female
Age: 4 years
Breed: Clydesdale
Herd: Loner
Rank: Loner
Mate: N/A
Personality: Kind, and sweet, and wants to join a herd.
Appearance:
Username: BantamsRbest
Picture or description:
Hello,
This is my blue silkie Ember. Do you think she is SQ? She has recieved BB, BV and Reserve Featherleg at both the CA state and Sacramento county fair.
Hello,
I am new to BYC and would like to say Hi and would like to know what you think of my 2 birds.
The gray one is a blue silkie pullet(7 months) and my cochin is around 1 month old. I have shown my silkie but obviously not the cochin. The silkie has recieved BB, BV and Reserve Featherleg at...