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  1. azurbanclucker

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    You've got a lot of negative space in this vertically. I would square crop it and put that bloom dead center. There's some lovely soft lighting here and if you give it just a bit of green all around it will pop. The focus is too soft on this. Your sharpest feature is the dead leaves on the left...
  2. azurbanclucker

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    also a great suggestion
  3. azurbanclucker

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    What are you using to edit?
  4. azurbanclucker

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    The exposure is a little dark and flat. You can tweak brightness/contrast and increase the exposure a bit to help there. Compositionally, My eye keeps getting pulled to the clipped flower petal lower right. Your focus on that specific flower looks really good, nice job there. This one's also...
  5. azurbanclucker

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    For this one, you need to level the image. It's leaning right pretty strongly. Focus looks good for an iphone shot, composition is also nice. This one isn't as strong. The focal point is the front chick, so the other 2 are soft even though your eye wants to focus on them all as a whole. Using...
  6. azurbanclucker

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    Clouds suck! They mess with your ability to really get detail in deep shadows because they make everything so flat. Having a strong black and stark light tones with no midtones doesn't help. Maybe try to b/w convert it and see if you can play with the lighting a bit to get some texture and...
  7. azurbanclucker

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    Your focus is just a tiny little bit off here (like millimeters). Its sharpest at the bridge of the beak and lower comb. The eye should be the sharpest focal point. You can go with a little deeper depth of field to get the whole face in. A change ion aperture or focal length is probably all you...
  8. azurbanclucker

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    Your focus is decent. The scene is pretty flat and hazy, looks like a grey morning. The canopy frame makes it a little cluttered. I'm guessing cell phone shot? Do you use any processing tools like snapseed or ps elements? You can tune some of that haze out and sharpen it up a bit. And silly as...
  9. azurbanclucker

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    Mom gave me permission.
  10. azurbanclucker

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    Bumpity bump.
  11. azurbanclucker

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    That's WAY better.
  12. azurbanclucker

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    Your birb is in nice focus shabs. I'm not of fan of the applied background blur thing on either iphone or android, they leave noticeable outlines around the subject and lack the gradual gradiation of the blurring that you get with mechanically created bokeh from a shallow DoF shot. It's a...
  13. azurbanclucker

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    I love the concept. There are a few things mechanically I see that you could try to really make it pop. 1. The image is backlit and the sky is blown out (too bright) Some additional light from the front would help balance it out a bit (even on-camera flash is probably enough) or shoot with the...
  14. azurbanclucker

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    We're just a corrupting influence. Hang around here long enough and I guarantee you will learn lots of stuff you never thought of about photography.
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  16. azurbanclucker

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    Yeah, a bit dark. Also she's slightly out of focus, which is probably because of low light shutter drag. And the foreground logs(?) really crowd her and are a distraction.
  17. azurbanclucker

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    it's a tad out of focus but the angle's better. Can you get in front of / a little off to the side and have someone pick one up and toss it at you?
  18. azurbanclucker

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    Told you shabs! :p
  19. azurbanclucker

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    I think you're fine. The water is level. Water never lies.
  20. azurbanclucker

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    First. Foreground being out of focus hurts the overall image in this case.
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