The dragonwings on the girl are good. I have a challenge for you. Try drawing different kinds of eyes. I don't know why I thought of it, because there is nothing wrong with one type. But I'd like to see you try a different type.
I like her, even with the tiny feet. My pegasus (that's why her wings are funny looking) unicorn d'Anver hen. As you can see, very characterized with the hawk beak and eyelashes and such. That is my cutesy style of drawing.