Hey Gertrude, could you take a look at this? And could you correct any grammar mistakes, and tell me where i made them, and could you tell me what you think of it? I figured, i might as well try it, it's been on my mind to make for a while.
Ill look through it for the mistakes.
And Bree wasn't upset by their deaths, because they had been trained in the past so if a situation like this arose, they would of course feel sadness, but if they had a mission to complete, they would just pass on by, and however wrong that may seem, it...
It's not a RP, But I was wondering if you could take the time to check out my new Story? I'm not sure if its any good so I need opinions, if you could, it would be great.