*Are they trust worthy?* RP (Needs players! Please sign up!)

[Chicken Tamer]

"Yeah." He said.

"Yea, why is it so cooled down here?"
Jesse shivered
(ha ha! All my charries are cold at some point XD)

 

[Wintent]

"I dont know." He said and wrapped his arms around her."better?"

 

[Chicken Tamer]

"I dont know." He said and wrapped his arms around her."better?"

Jesse blushed and stutered,
"Ye-yea, ttha0thank you..."

 

[Wintent]

"Aww come on I don't bite." He said and winked at her.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

Holy crap. An original RP. The only advice I can recommend is more originality/less Mary Sue traits in characters.

Username: Zinnia-Hen
Name: Era Zjarri Berisha
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Hobbies: Target shooting, automobiles, mechanics, chess; mostly traditionally masculine activities.
Past: She was born into the Albanian mafia, so ever since she was young she was quite accustomed to violence and having to move around constantly. Era finds most of her history difficult to explain to others.
Friends that came with you: N/A
Crush: N/A
Boyfriend/girlfriend: N/A
Spouse: N/A
Other: She is convinced she is where she is now because a rival group kidnapped her.
Personality: Quiet and logical, preferring to keep to herself rather than to speak out, a technique she learned at a young age that would save her later in life. Generally level-headed and understanding, but if anything, she really can't stand the over-privileged, undeserving excuses for children who take everything possible in their childhood for granted; especially considering she had to work very hard in order to obtain anything of use with her family.
Picture:

 

[Chicken Tamer]

"Aww come on I don't bite." He said and winked at her.

She giggled,
"Ha ha! I guess not."

 

[Chicken Tamer]

Holy crap. An original RP. The only advice I can recommend is more originality/less Mary Sue traits in characters.

Username: Zinnia-Hen
Name: Era Zjarri Berisha
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Hobbies: Target shooting, automobiles, mechanics, chess; mostly traditionally masculine activities.
Past: She was born into the Albanian mafia, so ever since she was young she was quite accustomed to violence and having to move around constantly. Era finds most of her history difficult to explain to others.
Friends that came with you: N/A
Crush: N/A
Boyfriend/girlfriend: N/A
Spouse: N/A
Other: She is convinced she is where she is now because a rival group kidnapped her.
Personality: Quiet and logical, preferring to keep to herself rather than to speak out, a technique she learned at a young age that would save her later in life. Generally level-headed and understanding, but if anything, she really can't stand the over-privileged, undeserving excuses for children who take everything possible in their childhood for granted; especially considering she had to work very hard in order to obtain anything of use with her family.
Picture:

accepted
btw, its night right now in the RP Just telling, and what do you mean? I dont really understand what you meant at the top XD

 

[Wintent]

She giggled,
"Ha ha! I guess not."

Charles laughed quietly.

 

[Chicken Tamer]

Charles laughed quietly.

"So, uh, what do you think of the new kid?"

 

[Chicken Tamer]

accepted
btw, its night right now in the RP Just telling, and what do you mean? I dont really understand what you meant at the top XD

(Oh I understand, and we arnt really, just doing basic stuff)