(i dunno. can you bump it, please? and there's no space between Shin and Shien)(Shin Shien, did you reply to my post?)
Cara waited, moving to graze again after a few minutes
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Flicka grazed for a while then went to get a drink of water
When Shard awoke, he lifted his head and whinnied. He noticed Cara had moved quite a distance from him, but she was still within sight. "You could've left," he said, climbing to his hooves.Moon sighed and went to the river.
He whinnied to Flicka.
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Crystal lifted her head and watched Moon and Flicka. Since leaving her brother, the filly's shyness had diminished, and she was beginning to dislike being the odd-mare-out.
Zachorzi struggled to right himself completely and climb to his hooves. Oblivious to pain, thanks to another switch in personality, he lowered his head and bit fiercely into Blanco's neck, ready to kill this competition off. The bay lowered his teeth until he tasted blood. "Now...get...out...of...my...territory!"Blanco fell under Zachorzi's weight with a loud 'oof'. His vision went blurry as one of Zachorzi's thrashing legs met with his forehead, and his jaw was forced painfully shut over his tongue.
The strange mare screamed and panicked. She went sprinting down the hill, just to trip over some rough land and come crashing down onto her knees.