Funny you want critique on a poem that’s about critique being negative and potentially harmful lol but it is a good reminder to all to be more conscientious about giving their opinion, good job!Hi!
Please feel free to either post your writing, or give creative advice!
I am looking for opinions on mine so that I can improve.
Don't think your writing is terrible, I'm sure it's not. Anything can be improved, and nothing is hopeless. If you have anything you would like to post, PLEASE do! I would love to meet some other writers. If you're not a writer, please feel free to let me know what you think!
Here's one of my poems:
The hardest thing for a practicing poet,
Is to open your talent to the world and show it.
Poet's bold letters from their pens fly,
But ask to see and they'll turn shy.
No one's work should be taken in jest,
And some poets think their works ain't the best.
What we fear is the utmost scorn,
To see our work tattered and torn.
So if you find a poet who shows his work,
Do not assume he's a showoff jerk.
His bravery will serve him well in the end.
You should salute that brave soul, my friend.