Lets write a story. One word at a time!

Here is how the story is reading right now...

Once upon a time. the little hen lived in a big fat brown glove. and one Day something very Weird but happened! A frog Hopped into The glove, soaking The poor Hen completely. Suddenly without provocation the frog leaped strait into the beak shocking the poor hen into squeezing out her first squeaky egg. Realizing that she had a beautiful magical pony watching her from inside the egg, the egg began farting and burping. Suddenly the frog said to the egg, "weird"!!! Since we are here at The catastrophic hatching Festival The Glistening Tents of the Magical ponies Shone brightly.
When they did all the Dancing they fell on their faces and rolled over the edge of insanity. Wait! Eating all the lemonade is bad for your crop and not good for eating! thread Because We Are Family and We Stand Together united under water even Though We are Very Happy And We Danced the Moonwalk All Apart went to The Dance went A Long Way Because The Turkey...


Basically this story has become an editors nightmare!
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Everyone needs to READ the story and then add a word that would make the story FLOW.
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I'm going to play editor and try to keep the flow of the "story" then you all can begin again. Please give me a little bit!
 
Once upon a time the little hen lived in a big fat brown glove. One day something very weird happened! A frog hopped into the glove, soaking the poor hen completely. Suddenly without provocation the frog leaped strait into the beak shocking the poor hen into squeezing out her first squeaky egg. Realizing that she had a beautiful magical pony watching her from inside the egg, the egg began farting and burping. Suddenly the frog said to the egg, "weird"!!! Since we are here at The Catastrophic Hatching Festival The Glistening Tents of the Magical Ponies shone brightly.

When they did all the dancing they fell on their faces and rolled over the edge of insanity. Wait! Because we are family and we stand together united in a big fat brown glove, we are very happy and we danced the Moonwalk.

But then a turkey walked up and...
 
Once upon a time the little hen lived in a big fat brown glove. One day something very weird happened! A frog hopped into the glove, soaking the poor hen completely. Suddenly without provocation the frog leaped strait into the beak shocking the poor hen into squeezing out her first squeaky egg. Realizing that she had a beautiful magical pony watching her from inside the egg, the egg began farting and burping. Suddenly the frog said to the egg, "weird"!!! Since we are here at The Catastrophic Hatching Festival The Glistening Tents of the Magical Ponies shone brightly.

When they did all the dancing they fell on their faces and rolled over the edge of insanity. Wait! Because we are family and we stand together united in a big fat brown glove, we are very happy and we danced the Moonwalk.

But then a turkey walked up and ate...
 

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