O.O I think I got claimed!- Constructive criticism on my singing?

[kargo]

I put a video of me singing up on youtube. lol

 

[Louieandthecrew]

...kargo Rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[kargo]

Haha, thanks Louie. Anyone got some constructive criticism? I've got these videos of me singing, and I really want to improve, so i need tips.

 

[Louieandthecrew]

I can't see them

 

[kargo]

That stinks. Are they working for everyone else?

 

[pdsavage]

If you realy want to sing I would suggest a vocal coach.I am trying to be honest without sounding cruel.Your tone and pitch are off,so find a vocal coach and they will get your tone and pitch on track.

 

[kargo]

It's okay. I asked for advice. Yeah, I sort of already knew about the pitch thing. I know I'm off track but I can't figure out how to fix it. I'm hoping my choir teacher will help me with that.