Is the one on the left older? If they are the same age then I would think that the one on the left has the correct body type. The one on the right seems to have less chestnut on the shoulders. Some chestnut is ok but is not desirable. They are some of the best looking boys I've seen so far.
The breeders on these links are some of U.K.'s best. They offer some great photos of what we should all be aiming for. Please pass along these links as they are the best that I have personally been able to dig up.
For every one that is still confused as to what your birds should look like and for British standards here are a couple good links.
https://sites.google.com/site/creamlegbarsonline/home
http://autosexing-poultry.co.uk/wordpress/
http://www.harislau.info/legbar
http://www.scartoppoultry.co.uk/
I would like to buy atleast on of your cream legbar roosters. How old are they and can you send me pics to [email protected]. Please call me at (925) 408-6876
Mansur Ward