Hey Gertrude, could you take a look at this? And could you correct any grammar mistakes, and tell me where i made them, and could you tell me what you think of it? I figured, i might as well try it, it's been on my mind to make for a while.
Prince Apollo.
And his cloak.
Prince Apollo spends his entire day out of the castle, other than when he is required to attend an event. Everybody in the town assumes he is just a stranger that moved to the town, and everybody knows about him, but nobody knows who he is, as he keeps low...
The Rules are very simple.
No Cursing.
If you're going to argue, do it elsewhere.
Love or Marrige is allowed.
Keep it PG-13.
All BYC rules apply.
Whatever I say goes.
You can jump in and play, but you must provide at least a picture.
And the #1 Rule! Have Fun!
The Town of Slove, it's a small...
You think the only people who are people, are the people who look and think like you. But if you walk the footsteps of a stranger, you’ll learn things you never knew you never knew.
Ill look through it for the mistakes.
And Bree wasn't upset by their deaths, because they had been trained in the past so if a situation like this arose, they would of course feel sadness, but if they had a mission to complete, they would just pass on by, and however wrong that may seem, it...
Shana thought through her days in her mind, a grin coming on her face, "Guess what happens tonight?" she said, thinking of the human fireworks, which she loved watching.
Bree's eyes narrowed, this was irritating to say the least, she looked in the water for signs of blood, but only found faint traces flowing in the current, she said something in elvish which has no meaning in the language of man, but it is sufficient to say, it was not nice. Bree walked back up...
Bree saw that the door was ajar, and he was gone, she immediately narrowed her eyes, running outside she quickly found his tracks, one light almost indistinguishable footprint, and one heavy, probably from his injury, "HE'S GONE!" Bree yelled towards the house, as she started off running after...