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  1. Kikiriki

    I finally wrote a letter to the county. Proofread and comments please

    PS. Love love love the ending! Very positive!
  2. Kikiriki

    I finally wrote a letter to the county. Proofread and comments please

    I would cut out the paragraph about how many stores offer organic egg choices as it undercuts your argument for needing your own chickens. Do keep the part about how many places offer coops...that was good! In the part about children I would add something about the rise in childrens health...
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