Scene 2 (Sad!) :
EXT. RUINED CASTLE - Courtyard - DAY
NANOHA and EURIA shuffle around the courtyard, collecting twigs and old pieces of vine. CILAN'S lifeless corpse lays neglected in the corner. A few birds caw above the three. EURIA snaps her fingers.
EURIA:
Hang on... We should contact...
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You think so? Thanks... *blushes* I can post or PM more, if y'all would like.
It's good. I like the way you put emotions into the characters, mine are mostly just sarcastic and are good at getting their way. Everything's sorta rushed, my writing style I guess
I'd like to hear more...
I used the PDF validator, Flare.
Chikky, there are a fair amount of scenes that definitely violate some BYC rules, but I can post a couple BYC-safe scenes if you like.