Looking for feedback on a couple of articles

[BantyChooks]

I have a few articles that I wrote over five years ago and are well overdue for updates. This time around, I am focusing on improving reader experience. So far I have finished updating one and am starting work on the next two. I'd like some feedback in regards to formatting, flow, and any gripes or questions that come to mind while reading it. Nothing too intense or time-consuming - just a skim and your first impressions. I'll attach a link to the article that I have mostly finished. Thanks in advance.

A Viewpoint on Handling Roosters: How to Deal with Aggression​

 

[Kiki]

I really like how you have a few sentences in bold lettering.

 

[Debbie292d]

I have a few articles that I wrote over five years ago and are well overdue for updates. This time around, I am focusing on improving reader experience. So far I have finished updating one and am starting work on the next two. I'd like some feedback in regards to formatting, flow, and any gripes or questions that come to mind while reading it. Nothing too intense or time-consuming - just a skim and your first impressions. I'll attach a link to the article that I have mostly finished. Thanks in advance.

A Viewpoint on Handling Roosters: How to Deal with Aggression​

I bookmarked this and I'll help later or tomorrow but right now I have to get back to work typing court. I'm behind today as I have chicks hatching between two incubators so I took way too many breaks!

 

[BantyChooks]

I bookmarked this and I'll help later or tomorrow but right now I have to get back to work typing court. I'm behind today as I have chicks hatching between two incubators so I took way too many breaks!

Thank you very much! I am not in a rush - don't feel obligated.

 

[BantyChooks]

I really like how you have a few sentences in bold lettering.

Oh good. I wasn't sure if it was distracting or helpful. Thanks.

 

[BantyChooks]

When reading articles, do you prefer focused and quick answers to a specific topic, or a broader approach with supplementary information?

 

[Debbie292d]

When reading articles, do you prefer focused and quick answers to a specific topic, or a broader approach with supplementary information?

Got the rooster one reviewed. That was awesome. I'll hit another one later.

I personally prefer the first type, quick answers. Your rooster article though would have lost too much and wouldn't have been as good.

I got mine up yesterday too if you don't mind giving it a peek when you get time.

https://www.backyardchickens.com/articles/sterilizing-hatching-eggs-from-mareks-mdv.79104/

 

[BantyChooks]

Got the rooster one reviewed. That was awesome. I'll hit another one later.

I personally prefer the first type, quick answers. Your rooster article though would have lost too much and wouldn't have been as good.

I got mine up yesterday too if you don't mind giving it a peek when you get time.

https://www.backyardchickens.com/articles/sterilizing-hatching-eggs-from-mareks-mdv.79104/

Thank you very much! I appreciate the help. I’ll take a look at yours shortly.

 

[BantyChooks]

Got the rooster one reviewed. That was awesome. I'll hit another one later.

I personally prefer the first type, quick answers. Your rooster article though would have lost too much and wouldn't have been as good.

I got mine up yesterday too if you don't mind giving it a peek when you get time.

https://www.backyardchickens.com/articles/sterilizing-hatching-eggs-from-mareks-mdv.79104/

I’m really impressed. I typically judge articles rather harshly compared to posts because they’re presented in a bit more of an authoritative format, but this one is great. I like the Q&A format with the data and conclusions listed afterwards - it’s easy to follow but thorough. Great job. I love it when people post original data.

 

[Debbie292d]

I’m really impressed. I typically judge articles rather harshly compared to posts because they’re presented in a bit more of an authoritative format, but this one is great. I like the Q&A format with the data and conclusions listed afterwards - it’s easy to follow but thorough. Great job. I love it when people post original data.

Thank you so much!!

I never thought I'd wind up doing this "experiment" much less an article until I researched sterilizing eggs from Marek's and found absolutely nothing. Thus, the idea was born!