Looking for poets to help me with a few lines!!

CoyoteMagic

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I'm working on a little something for a craft fair, plus I plan on making up a bunch to give to a cancer organization here to give away. I'm trying to come up with a little diddy to go with it. Here's what I've got so far.

Prayer Quilt

I am a little prayer quilt,
to hold in your hand.
To help when troubles arise,
those things that were not planned.

Hold me tight in your fist,
if it helps to calm your fears,
and don't be afraid to use me,
to wipe away your tears



This is where I get stuck. I think there should be a little bit more and then I want to finish with this.

Remember that God and I,
are right here in your pocket!


It's going to be a 6x6 little quilt that can fit in a pocket. Ragged edges. They will be in various colors. Most made with scraps.

HELP!!!!

Please feel free to critique
 
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Instead of this:

are right here in your pocket!

this:

in your pocket reside



maybe you can rhyme more with that?
 
For misfortune can't sew
The things I can reap
With God on your side
His treasures to keep.


or


For misfortune can't sew
The things I can bare
With God on your side
I'll always be there.
 
Thanks Maple and Swamp for your suggestions.

I'm not sure what I really want. Something not too serious, kind of fun and melodious.

I haven't written in years. Writers blocks.
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So remember that God, and I,
are right here in your pocket.
and each time that you reach for me,
a blessing on you will be deposited.

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Can't wait to see a pic Coyote....
 

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