That sounds good in general design, assuming the vent is on the usually-downwind side of the coop. (You do NOT want to be doing that on the upwind side, even with the baffle)
Remember though that just as a chain is only as strong as its weakest link, an airflow path is only as, um, "open" as its narrowest part. So if you have a 2x24" slot open at the bottom of your wind baffle, then that is the effective amount of ventilation you are going to have, even if the triangular vent within the baffle is larger.
Two inches by two feet is, what, 48 square inches, which is about 0.3 square feet, which is really not a lot. For a coop with just a couple-few chickens in it, it might be adequate if you take other measures to keep the coop as dry as possible. For a coop with a 'normal' amount of chickens in it, it is certainly better than NO ventilation but probably going to fall short of adequate and leave you with some humidity/frostbite problem.
So (unless you *do* only have a couple chickens) if you could make this thing larger, or more than one of it, or anything like that to increase the total amount of ventilation available, it'd really be wise.
One option, if for some reason the structure of the coop really limits you, would be to make the stand-out wind guard *hinged*, so you can tilt it out away from the coop to use the full extent of the (larger) triangular opening when necessary and when not too windy. This would give you up to, I dunno, whatever the size of the triangle would be -- 2x2x2' would be something like 1.6 sq ft of opening, I think although I did not actually fish out my calculator -- for use on calm days, and you could close the wind guard down partly or totally on windier days, towards or "to" that 0.3 sq ft it has when vertical.
Good luck, have fun,
Pat