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Definitely a good write-up, great job!
Really nice to see plans and material lists and pictures. And writing 'what I would change' is always helpful for those who come after you.
I love how you included a material list!
Your run is a good size and I like the ease of access to it. Your ventilation in your coop is a good as well. Something to consider is increasing the size of the coop is more birds are going to be kept there. I would also increase the size of the run if the birds are never let out to free range.