Trouble-shooting when your eggs don't hatch.

What is a failed hatch? Why didn't my eggs hatch? What can I do next time?
Some tweaking would make this article easier to read...break up the large block of text at the opening, fix where the text overlaps, maybe make some of the text smaller and more manageable to scroll through. Overall, good info, just needs to be easier to read.
I do really like the idea of graphics for an article, but it's impossible for screen readers to handle, and images tend to break much easier than text does so I'm worried about long term accessibility. Some of the graphics have overlapping text as well. Overall, thoughtful article with helpful information. Thanks for sharing.
Great explanations of what causes "dud" eggs to not develop or hatch.

I'd put some paragraphs in the first part to make this easier to read and flow better. There is some text overlap in the blue and black words half way through. Great job though and thorough!
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