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He didn't seem like he was going to spit out what was bothering him any time soon. Lariah sighed and looked out the window. I wonder if-. Her head...
" Edwin, something's wrong, isn't it?" Lariah asked. He looked very disturbed and uncomfortable, like what Lariah thought she looked like right now.
Looks like a pullet but I would keep an eye on it. A picture of the body would be more helpful.
(i admit i did go little too much into detail hehe)
Lariah felt very uncomfortable. She was hot, her face felt melted, her dress was itchy, and...
What a handsome roo! It's quite funny a bantam took charge, tiny but mighty [IMG]
(haha okay i guess she'll be getting in a carriage?Haha their wearing ball-gowns right? Oh and a splendid braid is a type of hairstyle)
Nice birds! What breed is that dark feathered one, it's beautiful! [IMG]
(OMG WHATS HAPPENED AHHH i was camping)
(ahh okay time skip??? And was Lariah invited? [IMG])