Lee, I am a Junior in highschool.
For those who are curious, My ES did finally get my essay, and yes, I got an A.
Thank you all for your praise, and even more for your critiques!
As I have mentioned, without all of you, I would be at a total loss.
Yay I am back!! Our computer crashed and Jeauca and I have not been able to get on. And thank you Jesus I posted this essay on here. Otherwise, it would be GONE. So now all I have to do is redo the spacing on word, fix the mistakes that were so kindly pointed out ( ) , and turn it in...
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It took me about 4 days to write the rough draft and type it out. Like I said, "Whew!!"
Thanks all for your advice and praise! I am also thinking about adding a paragraph about Cleo's crop operation, so I guess I will post that for corrections once I get that typed up as well, LOL...
I have very last person on this forum to thank for this. Without all of you, my essay would have looked like this....
"Uhhhhh,.... chickens lay eggs. The end. "
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Someone on the forum just asked this very question today!! Good job, I'll give you an "A", hope your teacher does too!!
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This is actually going to my Education Specialist, not mom, LOL. I sure hope I get an A!!!
For anyone who might be interested, (probably just me but hey ) Here is the essay. The pics probably wont show up because they are not on photobucket. Any thought or suggestions on how to make it better? Am I mistaken on any "facts" or thoughts that I listed?
Advice from anyone with the...
I JUST finished my 20 pg, 4,551 word essay on chickens!!! Complete with pics and ready for the teach for tomorrow!!
Now I have to get started on my Home Ec essay.