Night padded out of his den. The dew sparkled on the snow, as the sun started to rise. He yawned and stretched out, flexing his sharp claws. His mate, Flower was already on the smooth rock ledge outside their den. Night gave her ear a lick and Flower rested her muzzle on his shoulder. Night...
Hello everyone!
I am making a book, and thought you guys would like to see and help me. I will need to turn it in to an editor, and I want as much help on editing as I can! As I give each chapter, please correct places in any color, as long as it is not black. Thanks for all help!
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