ஜ~~Mirror, Mirror on the Wall RP~~ஜ ((UPDATES))

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Snow smiled. The girl reminded her of herself, in a more dangerous way. They arrived at the camp and Snow ordered a gaurd to pitch a tent next to her own and ordered him to tell people she was under Snow's hospitality and was not to have any trouble, under penalty of death. In the meantime they went back to Snow's tent. Snow held open the falp for Icis. The tent was large and red and had a bed, a long table with a dozen chairs and a large animal bed for Shadow. A similar, smaller, tent was being pitched next door for Icis.
 
A gaurd walked into the tent. He said, "My lady, the tent you ordered is ready." and walked out. Snow looked at Icis and smiled. "Come. I'll bring you there and make sure you are settled in." Snow walked out and walked next door where a medium sized tent was waiting. She waited for Icis.
 
Snow held open the tent flap for Icis and said, "This is your tent. If anyone bothers you just tell me and I will bring you their head." She smiled at her and then walked back in the direction of her tent.
 
Icis watched her go, narrowing her eyes slightly. She said nothing, only fell onto her bed, running a hand through her hair. She sighed once, leaving almost a vibration in the air around her.
 
Snow was in her tent when it happened. She heard a scuffle outside and then a moan of agony. And a man stepped inside of her tent, holding something in his hand. He had long black hair and inhumanly blue eyes. He was tall and muscular but lithe and graceful at the same time. Snow sat straight up and felt for her sword. She grasped it firmly and stood up suspicously. The stranger grinned an evil grin and started walking towards her, what she could now see was a knife in his hand. Snow raised her sword higher and stood her ground. The stranger laughed then, a laugh that sent chills up and down Snow's spine. She said, "Stop. Who are you and what do you want?" He just grinned and jumped over the table with inhuman strength and grace. Snow slowly started to walk around him , towards the tent entrance. He was now a foot away from her. He backed her up against the wall. He smelled like decaying flesh and blood. Snow gagged as he traced her face lightly with his knife, drawing blood. He then held it to her throat and said with a deep, almost purring voice, "The Queen told me you beautiful. That was an understatement." he grinned seductivly as the blood dripped down her face, making crimson rivers. He pushed a hair from her face. Snow spit in his eye. He recoiled and she kicked him in the gut and pushed him to the ground. She stabbed him through the chest as he grinned, one last time, and then he was dead. Snow searched him for anything of use and found many a strange weapon hidden. He had about 5 knifes of strange make hidden. She then went out side and saw her guard was dead. She ran to find Shadow.
 
Icis merely blinked, hearing it happen. Her startling but entrancing black eyes were malevolent, endless black pools of evil. But they accented her flawless ashen skin wonderfully, with the asset of her jet black, streaked white also, hair, which lightly brushed her shoulders. It was pin straight and fell perfectly over her shoulders without her trying - the way models wanted their hair to fall during photoshoots. Icis possesed that perfect model walk, that one foot in front of the other swing (which I can also pull off! Lawl.), giving a sway to her walk. Her appearance was nothing but pulchritudionous.
 
(( LOL, sorry~!! ^-^;;;; I'm an AP grammar/language arts/vocabulary/reading/physics student, I have one of the widest vocabulary range in the USA for my grade, {I ranked higher than 98% of America in vocab} so the occasional long word slips. Sorry. ^-^;;; Pulchritudionous means elegant, beautiful, flawless, etc. ))
 

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